Last edited by Penskills; March 3rd, 2004 at 07:50 PM
::...I... Till (IIIII) Die
Thats me!!!
The Legion
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HoF x5
Hmm~~~Die....Originally Posted by TiLLEyEDiE
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Thats me!!!
Damn Pen.....once again at it again.....I like the whole how would you put it........fantasy feel to it....it was great..........your an awesome story teller man no doubt about that.....an once again you prove it.....just plain dope.....now why is it that your not in legends yet? I think your better than most those overrated cats anyway.....theyll soon realize it...........hey maybe thats why they hate on you.......keep doing your thing man.........peace
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Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ILLness PenSkills Nice piece right here the way you structured
The story. Great beginning and ending cause and effect type
Construction buy using a story line. It kept a unique flow as well
Impressive . Very nice structure I could learn from you with the
Structure and all. Nice vocabulary usage like always. I think you
Have the best vocabulary usage I have seen in a while besides from
Me lol joke. Anyways great drop. And also a nice topic.
Laters
iight...
This was a cool topic... And a liked the way that you portrayed the images into my mind...
This was... As usual... A dope drop by you...
Consistently dropping dope pieces now... Setting the standard for other drops in OM in my opinion...
Only one thing about this piece... Maybe abit too long... But that is really me trying to scrape the barrel for constructive critisism...
Keep it up... Or a wont be happy!
Pz...
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Shit was hot except for the part "
On the eve of nuclear destruction, I wandered the halls
of Hades, wet from wading out of Styx's horrible jaws"
Doesn't go together just right fix it up a little and shit would be 10/10 and I don't give niggas good ratings
you keep giving that same stare/
I'ma pull the tray out like the back of a airplane chair/
cool~~~~
Good piece...the first few bars, I found it didnt flow...but I dont know. The structure was good, along with vocabulary...everything in tact here...Good idea, and nice theme....Damn, another dope piece for Penskills...Im starting to envy you.
can I kick it?
...^^
damn pen...i aspire to be like you and lirael and muthugga...damn you alll..dope people..im 3/4 dope...not dope enuff..anywayz another nice drop..we gotta collab sumtime....keep droppin..pz
-Daz
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
^ WOW...I'm truly flattered by your comment..I'm still long away though...
damn very unique...great vocabulary, wordplay and structure....the way you made everything seem real through your words was amazing. I loved the topic. Uhhh im not sure if im the one to tell you what to work on...but i guess i can say work untill you get a peice in legends...
Scytsophrenia
^ thanks Top.... Uhhh im not sure if im the one to tell you what to work on...but i guess i can say work untill you get a peice in legends...
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