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You spit 1st
Timeless
Daffer22
15-20 lines
Usual rules
You spit 1st
Come on Timeless spit......
Come on Timeless don't say that you're not gonna show up......spit already
Tell me, why you droppin lines written by a blonde bimbo?
You woulda been better off duckin' my bars like playin limbo!
I harnass carnage to smash through ya antiques stained with tarnish
Under ya bullshit exterior, I find out your'e nothing and harmless
The welts grow exponetially and it's potentially bad for your health.
Daf when I saw your call out, I knew it should have been for help
You could spit your swiftest shit and I’ll make it look like molasses
Didn’t think that they had classes to teach you’re level of wackness
You’re only practice, cause the fact-is I crack-kids ten times better than u
I got a tight hold on this fortress and there no way I’m lettin’ you through
He didn’t have to accept-this, so I’ll make sure this punk-will-regret-it
All cut-and-beheaded; I’ll leave him more fucked up-than-my-credit!
You get-left-a-Disaster; cause your losses is-worse-than-9/11..tragedies
Cause you’ve been “ripped” so many times you gotta “split”-personalities
dafs real Skill is 2 make his Tongue Slap on Nut Sac's whiles I steady Gun Clap Them Actors
U aint Competition bcuz u couldn't write a Vision if ur Pen was Manufactured by Lens Crafters
its over
(sorry it took so long but its hard coming up with 16 good lines, i cant just do it in 15 minz ya know)
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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Ok ppl timeless is givin up I have the impression..............
its there you faggot, dont back down now coz ya seen it! SPIT!
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Doper Than You-
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Yo Timeless when I battle you, time surely stands still
You're just worthless, don't have the balls to spit ill
I leave you in nothinness when it's hard for you to chill
I'm not harmless cuz I make u thrill
Don't have to spit my swiftest shit to make u collapse
I don't even have to hit to defeat that rap
Timeless just admit ,that shit you wrote, was just crap
When I read it, I thought about havin a nap
Sure you think your shit was good
Betta think twice cuz you ain't a nigga from the hood
You just challenged daffer but I think you miss understood
I kick your ass down the floor, you always come back for more
I make u cry like a whore when she doesn't get the money where she fucked for
I'll bet you don't even know who I be, but after this you will see
That I'm a lyrical g, and you be as scared as a fuckin newbie
I don't have nothin to gays, but you're an exception
Betta start to pray, or be killed with my fuckin injection
You even can't get an erection, so how does it feel to get this reaction
Vote pplll
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I think timeless took this.....his flow was just better all around.....good wordplay as well as punches....very nice....
I harnass carnage to smash through ya antiques stained with tarnish
Under ya bullshit exterior, I find out your'e nothing and harmless--Good line!
Daffer your flow didnt seem as consistent to me as Time but it was pretty good nonetheless keep at it.........
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I can't vote because I don't have enough posts, but here's some feedback.
Flow - As far flow Timeless without a doubt was better. It didn't sound forced which I
felt was the case with some of Daffer's lines. It didn't flow as well and was a
little bit harder to read than Timeless's. Many lines were too wordy while others
were too short.
Punches/Personals- Timeless definitly had more creative punches that seemed to hit
alot harder than Daffer's. I liked the diss about Daffer's callout
being one for help and the Lenscrafter line at the end. As for
Daffer, his punches were weak an uninspired. They lacked the
Creativity to really hit hard. Timeless also had a few personals
that i thought were, pretty good. Daffer on the other hand,
should try using more personals, because he really didn't have any.
Creativity- I liked the creativity here by Timeless, nice solid punches , except for the
line about molasses which I feel Is a little played out. Daffer really needs
elevate, not alot of creativity or originality here. Concepts are played out.
To me this wasn't even close. Timeless cleary takes it in every category.
Daffer should work on his punches and personals and use a little bit more
creativity. My vote goes to Timeless.
aight I can take criticism more votes plz
ightt daffer22 came harder with the hardhittind punches and good structuer
OK the beak down
FLOW:daffer your flow was good but fell off a couple of times but u mad it work,Timeless u need ta elevvate son your still a newB u have time
STRUCTUER:daffter had ightt structuer and time your shit was all over with run ons it was hard ta read
PUNCHES:daFFER u had some OK punches,TIME you had a couple of good ones to but he had more better punches
PERSONALS:i didnt really see any punches from DAFF and time yours was hard ta read cuz of the structuer
MY VOTEAFFER22
AYO return the favor and hit this battle up real fast so i can get the 3-0 knock out thanx
here's the LiNk
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111881
hit muh battle up sence i took time ta vote on this shit 4 yall thanx...................<~*1*~>
I did hardhitter............
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