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saltshaka
MichaelCorleone
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Yo i'm hea....U know this.......................................10 lines....start writin
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My alias be godfather cause i put hits out on whack rappers.
My lyrics choppin ya down and burn ya. ya scared losin ya bladder.
They call ya saltshaka. I guess you ridin dicks for ying yang.
I tried to be nice but your last post caused me to bring tha pain.
I guess you embarrassed by where you from so hide it.
You should look at the other niggas who dead from my lyrics and tried it.
But I give ya credit ya got heart for fuckin wit that best of tha south.
I would wait for you to reply but yo probably got a twin dick in ya mouth.
You mind like an empty salt shake you got nothin inside.
You hungry. I done killed it. so nigga swallow ya pride.
Michael you only wish u wuz a myers for a chance to return//
Only it doesn't have to be Halloween for me to make ya burn//
U wanna cumback? Bitch lick ya lips//
You cant spitta punch might as well start throwin kicks//
It doesn't matta how many timez ya take ya wordz to a playground tryin ta get in tha game//
Ya lyrics will neva be on top of mine, if ya wuz usin a crane//
Homie sayz he be a beast, hell even tha king of tha jungle//
Hiz record gonna be worst then tha Lions, so letz get rdy to rumble!//
Ding Ding!
I'm taken this Kombat Mortally and i'm ready to finish him//
Dog, you couldn't beat me, I could reap tha grym//
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Hmm..I dont think n e onez gonna vote...
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reppppppppppin Carolina
can we get a vote. for real. this thang aint ever gone be wrapped up.
i dunno who won
honestly the lines didn't go together
you had one line 8 times longer than the next n if you do it to a beat ur off cue
so both ur flows weren't that great
corleone had some nice hits i guess
dunno who won tho
My shit bang, spit flames, put niggaz to shame
Flow so insane, lyrics sick and derranged
Now you can't, mention my city unless you mention my name
T-I-P-I-M-P, I'm the manne
riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight?
lol..........but oh well go Carolina!
My alias be godfather cause i put hits out on whack rappers.
My lyrics choppin ya down and burn ya. ya scared losin ya bladder.
Not bad flow here, and a decent opener
They call ya saltshaka. I guess you ridin dicks for ying yang.
I tried to be nice but your last post caused me to bring tha pain.
Hmm...wasnt really feeling this
I guess you embarrassed by where you from so hide it.
You should look at the other niggas who dead from my lyrics and tried it.
Nice, only change i mighta made was a different twist for an ending rhyimg word instead of 'it' .. sometimes it works, but its just a suggestion
But I give ya credit ya got heart for fuckin wit that best of tha south.
I would wait for you to reply but yo probably got a twin dick in ya mouth.
Ok, kinda a played out punch with the 'dick in the mouth' .. otherwise ok
You mind like an empty salt shake you got nothin inside.
You hungry. I done killed it. so nigga swallow ya pride.
Solid ending to an edgy rhyme
Michael you only wish u wuz a myers for a chance to return//
Only it doesn't have to be Halloween for me to make ya burn//
Didnt really care for this opener
U wanna cumback? Bitch lick ya lips//
You cant spitta punch might as well start throwin kicks//
Great first line, but you lost a potentially great punch with the second
It doesn't matta how many timez ya take ya wordz to a playground tryin ta get in tha game//
Ya lyrics will neva be on top of mine, if ya wuz usin a crane//
Stretched a lil, but not bad
Homie sayz he be a beast, hell even tha king of tha jungle//
Hiz record gonna be worst then tha Lions, so letz get rdy to rumble!//
Probably you're worst line
Ding Ding!
I'm taken this Kombat Mortally and i'm ready to finish him//
Dog, you couldn't beat me, I could reap tha grym//
Closer needs a little work, but wasnt bad
Overall - I felt that Michael took this..Saltshaka, you need some work, but keep practicing, you are going in the right direction. Peace.
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Shaka U Killed U Were Like Hard On Punches Mad Flow And Mad Multies It Flowed Fuckin Awsome Ur Structure Wa A Lil Gay But In Da Middle U Picked Up Speed And Killed
Ok Michael Ur Wack I Think U Didnt Flow Great Casue Ur Rhymes Didnt Really Rhyme Ur Were Off Base Instead Of 2 Bars Switch U Were Like 3 Bars Switch No Multies Ok Punches But Ur Punches Didnt Rhyme Elevate But Thanks For Ya Vote On My Otha Battle
My Vote Shaka
Yo LIL RENEGADE is makin his way up da ranks vote on my battle ill vote on yours
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