Lyrical Fitness/Collab

[Wise Ways]

I don't think they ready for this shit man....Leave them dihydrated ya heard...

TheUnderRated:

I'm at the highest point above an observers horizon...
volcano flow although only get attention when i'm geysin..
Ready release realness till I succumb to exhaustion...
spit grief through my teeth often.....definin lyrical flossin...
train often to spit through coughins fuck me ever stoppin
lyrically hospitalized the only way you'll ever be chart toppin...
you see the veins in my head poppin out telekinetically trainin..
wise ways and Rated collabed now they open mic reignin..
I'm benchin vocab likes it nothing though i got a ton on..
wise ways pulls back his hoodie like "you need a spot son?"....
my styles more flexible than yoga mixed with kama sutra...
battle topical, text, audio, man whatever suits ya...
Got Mic-elangelo's In-nate Hand-le when it comes to aesthetics..
to sleep on Wise bitches gotta be Under anesthetics...
see the flex muscle made from scriptin text to vets...
constantly constructin connects and answerin RB threats...
illness flows through my blood i'm litterally reppin blood type..
since i bleed letters kids try to cut me up at that knife fight...
spiritual spillin.. fuck it.. i'm sweaty.. tired of lyrical killin...
wise script somethin..hit me up when record sales break a million

They don't need a water break...fuck that...get back to ya shit..

Wise Ways:

Frontiering thru tha jungle on a steady pace with a machette
Ripping heavy..attacking and slashing tha fuck out of a yette
Under & Wise playing hop scotch..from continent to continent
Juggling tha atmosphere, moon & stars..without even dropping it
Then doing push-ups with one Hand..only using two fingers
Tha other hand..socking punching bags filled with beginners
Meanwhile jogging up stairs at speeds that make light look slow
Pierce ya brain with hurricains..knock tha wind out u in 1 blow
Got more than 40 foot verticals..Wise can jump out of a crevace
& then just jump right into quicksand..& then get out in seconds
We taking leaps of faith..making it all around tha whole globe
Like a ghost..running across tha sun's surface on my tippie toes
Intergallactical prisions..twisting saliva vowels in to infinite bars
Straight spitting shit hard on earth's clone..to create life on mars
Crash landed.. playing leap frog with all nine of tha planets
Gambeling with ya life..making cards explode like I was gambet
Can catch me on jet clouds..I'll be busy practicing pull ups
Let go of tha shit..sky diving down without getting a nose rush
Eating so many emcees..to stay in shape..I'm always crunchin abs
Pin weak ones on their thorax..& exercise on em doing jumping jacks

Fucka Subway....Who needs it when you got Lyrical Fitness.....Part 2 coming soon

[Wise Ways]

uppin this shit man

[Endeva.]

nice collab... both came good with the topic,, and had some good metaphors.... Under, thought yu had a good use of vocab, and worded well, Wise, thought your flow was smooth...
...other than that, what can i say all aspects were decent.... i liked it.... the two verses went well together...... keep it up....

[Wise Ways]

thank you
..............
There'll be a part 2 coming soon

[Word Definate]

ill wordplay wise ways....nice drop from the first kid....hot topic....waitin on part 2

[Wise Ways]

up in this shizzy

[TheUnderRated]

surprise another open mic slept on word guys we would love some feedback .....the collab is decent.........let us know what you thought bout it.............

[-Smoke-]

dis was a nice collab...both obviously had flow...
both verses were nice...wordplay etc...
favorite lines...

"you see the veins in my head poppin out telekinetically trainin..
wise ways and Rated collabed now they open mic reignin..
I'm benchin vocab likes it nothing though i got a ton on..
wise ways pulls back his hoodie like "you need a spot son?"...."

"Then doing push-ups with one Hand..only using two fingers
Tha other hand..socking punching bags filled with beginners"

nice...

keep it up...

[Wise Ways]

^thank you ....appriciated

[Wise Ways]

Feedback please

[Daz]

dope....i like this shit..had me laughing and visualizin..go peep me and ace's collab

[Wise Ways]

Thank you.....
anymore????
This a dope collab..
You must read it

[Split]

not bad, some original wordplay, very unoriginal name,(bitten from lost boys) underrated had good vocab, wordplay was original, though it seemed a bit weak to me. Your flow was decent, had a few good multis, but a bit more work could have gone into your transitions.

Wise Ways, your flow was nice, wordplay was also original, but also a bit weak, vocab was nice. some of the lines were kinda corny, like the" Wise can jump out of a crevice, into quicksand, and get out in seconds." that was weak, it seemed to me that you could have had some killer lines, but you would screw em up sayin shit like.
"like a ghost, running across the suns surface on my tippie toes" the ghost thing just ruined that whole bar. but anyways, it was enjoyable enough to read, i actually finished it, so i guess i can't complain to much about it. Please don't take any of it to heart, just friendly criticism, no hate what so ever.
6/10, decent drop

p.s. you should let me get in on part 2 though, sounds like a fun topic, i always love to brag about my skills, so hit me up..

[Wise Ways]

Meh...I don't know about that...
Lyrical Fitness is Under and Mine...
Maybe we can collab on something else though

[M-Sixteen]

man! this is hot shit dawg, im in the process of losin my first battle and i think i was sleepin on the talent! this is a collabo!!!