Token Vs. Axe

[Token]

10 Lines.
You Spit First.
Keystyle.

Due by 7:00 pm ET Tommorow. (Friday)

Check in.

[Axe]

Check.

Word, I'll get at you tomorrow.

[Token]

Alright, I'm ready to drop.

I will report you to IR and make u DQ yourself if you no show.

[Token]

This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos..
.. Is standing next to Walter Wall!
Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people
I told you to say your prayers..
.. But you tripped over the steeple!
Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave
Said the shadow is coming..
..But you just needed to shave!
Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest
Feeble thinks for you..
..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless!
But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel
That's not just what it sounds like..
..It's how we ALL feel!
You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work
Although I'm finishing this with an Axe..
..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK

[Token]

Hurry up.

[Axe]

My internet service died on Thursday night. You just showed this to me now. I'll get to this by tomorrow.

[Axe]

Hi, thanks for your patience Toke. Even though you bitched at me every day on AIM.

You edited. Hoe. You went over 10 lines. Hoe. Enjoy.

Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself.
Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself!
Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth.
Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth!
“Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd.
Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend!
Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees.
Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese!
Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away.
People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte!

This is a battle between two IR agents, so explain your votes dukes, or they will be taken away promptly.

[Young Philly]

I'm gonna go with Toke on this one.

I felt Tokens punches were more effective, and were filled with better personals.
I especially liked the bar "Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest
Feeble thinks for you..
..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless!"
I thought Toke was more creative with his punches, because I've heard the male kissing one and the Chuck E Cheese line's a few times before.

So overall, for creativity and better punches/personals, I'm going with Token.

Interesting... your vote is almost idential to mine in which I voted against you. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...42#post1139342.
If you feel it's still a legit vote... leave it Token.
-Axe

Didnt I vote before you?

^No.
-Axe

Vote gone.
-Axe

[GaZeeBo]

aight nice battle mods

ummm i really dont kno
this was a close battle....a very close battle

since most of the categorys were tied i think that im going to go with the person that has the better punches

ax got structure vocab personals
token got flow creativity wordplay

i think the person that had the better punches was ax

i loved this like:
Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd.
Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend!

that was hott
tokens urs was hott also but i feel that axe's punch hit harder and hit more directly

just an honest vote

v/axiom

[Emerge]

This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos..
.. Is standing next to Walter Wall!
/\whats the point of throwing another random member in for a punch??
yeah it was witty but stilll...dont be silly
Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people
I told you to say your prayers..
.. But you tripped over the steeple!
decent
Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave
Said the shadow is coming..
..But you just needed to shave!
blah filler
Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest
Feeble thinks for you..
..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless!
lol...blah decent
But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel
That's not just what it sounds like..
..It's how we ALL feel!
never bold ever again EVER...decent
You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work
Although I'm finishing this with an Axe..
..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK

this was fucking garbage

Hi, thanks for your patience Toke. Even though you bitched at me every day on AIM.

You edited. Hoe. You went over 10 lines. Hoe. Enjoy.
/\shut up

Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself.
Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself!
...feed? blah filler
Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth.
Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth!
lol decent
“Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd.
Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend!
lmao personal!
Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees.
Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese!
decent
Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away.
People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte!
meh filler

all in all you both suck...


good battle gentlemen

[Savir]

This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos..
.. Is standing next to Walter Wall!
wack ass set up...but u came back decent...6/10

Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people
I told you to say your prayers..
.. But you tripped over the steeple!
nope...didnt like....3/10

Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave
Said the shadow is coming..
..But you just needed to shave!
meh..i dont see how this is a diss....4/10

Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest
Feeble thinks for you..
..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless!
coo...7/10

But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel
That's not just what it sounds like..
..It's how we ALL feel!
ok...7/10

You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work
Although I'm finishing this with an Axe..
..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK
hmm...not good closer...5/10

overall.....for Token...32/60...this is over 50%....



Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself.
Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself!
alright opening...7/10

Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth.
Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth!
wack....seemed promising on the set up..but no...2/10

“Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd.
Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend!
blah..nothin good here...3/10


Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees.
Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese!
didnt like this either....3/10

Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away.
People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte!
soft hitting closer...5/10

overall...for Axiom...20/50...40%...


Winner is Token...but pretty weak battle right chea ..no hate..just a vote..late

[Savir]

oops..i accidently polled Axiom instead of Token..fixed that if u must........sorry

[Chris Black]

This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos..
.. Is standing next to Walter Wall!
got a slight smile
Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people
I told you to say your prayers..
.. But you tripped over the steeple!
not really feein' this one
Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave
Said the shadow is coming..
..But you just needed to shave!
eeeh, cool
Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest
Feeble thinks for you..
..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless!
eehh, ok
But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel
That's not just what it sounds like..
..It's how we ALL feel!
not feelin' it
You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work
Although I'm finishing this with an Axe..
..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK
ok, should have been stronger though

this verse was ok...Nothing spactacular or stood out...


Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself.
Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself!
lmao, this was nice
Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth.
Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth!
eeh, not feelin' it
“Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd.
Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend!
nope
Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees.
Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese!
nah, not feelin' it
Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away.
People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte!
this was ok

Opener was ill, the closer was ok, I wasn't feeling much more

Even though Axe had the illest line, token came more consistant. Where axe had an ok line and an ill line to show for his verse, token had about 4 decent lines to show. He just came much more consistant and provided a better read, front to back. After the opener Axe let me down with the rest of his verse.

Vote: Token

-W1

[Aisle Phive]

You're all idiots.

Sorry Token, but Axe killed you here. You came nice dukes, and you're elevating immensely. But Axe ripped the shit here, everything about his verse was funny. This vote is honest, I'm actually cooler with you than Axe. But fuck it, here's a breakdown.

Tokester.

This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos..
.. Is standing next to Walter Wall!
Par.
Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people
I told you to say your prayers..
.. But you tripped over the steeple!
Ok but not hard hitting.
Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave
Said the shadow is coming..
..But you just needed to shave!
Filler in a way, sorta funny.
Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest
Feeble thinks for you..
..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless!
Lay off the name punches, they're getting old, this was aight.
But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel
That's not just what it sounds like..
..It's how we ALL feel!
A cut above par.
You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work
Although I'm finishing this with an Axe..
..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK
Best bar of your verse, but don't use a punch in a setup again.


Axe's verse.

Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself.
Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself!
Good.
Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth.
Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth!
Best bar in your verse, fuckin' hilarious.
“Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd.
Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend!
Aight.
Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees.
Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese!
Also very dope.
Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away.
People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte!
Par.

Sorry, Token, Axe came dizzope. He came consistent and had a few punches that actually made me laugh.

Soooo, vote - Axe.

EDIT: TOKEN DON'T EVER BITCH AT ME EVER AGAIN, YOU CAME WACK AND GOT KILLED, END OF FUCKING STORY, AND NEVER EVER BLOCK ME AGAIN, HERB.

[Bottom Line]

Token
You came dope. you had some good ass punches with a lot of wit behind them. Your closer wasn't all that spectacular.

Axiom
You came dope also. Your punches had me rollin. but whut really won this battle for was your first two bars.

vote= AXIOM

vote on this honestly:

Vote doesn't count, weakly explained. But LMAO @ Token in regard's to Aisle 5's vote.
-Axe