Michael Madness Vs. Y.L.

[Mad Mike]

Ight Heres the deal....
Check in...
Blind spit,
10-15 lines,
No feeding,
no hate votes,
no crew votes,
Post by 10 Tonite

[Mad Mike]

Mm........check.......mm........check........mm... ......check

[Y.L.]

alright, this is my check in....so 10 what?? eastern? mountain? im on mountain time....so what time lkine are you on?

[Mad Mike]

Eastern standard Time, I dunno jus make sure your shit is posted tonite ight homie?

[Y.L.]

iight, hey go vote on my otha battle...it was jus a mess around but our battle you can expect a vet to be droppin ......so dont judge me ont hat one...lol

[hardhitter]

u dont know wut your getting in to MR..................haha..........sorry bout the free post madness but........GET UM BOY..........haha.....1.....

[Y.L.]

Yeah Madness is tight....but i beatin better....its hard tryna beat the best when your a newb to tha site...ya mean? haha.....ima drop soon tho...gettin to bored

[Y.L.]

ima drop ten to twelve bars aiight? cuz i wanna rip you hard......ima between 6 and 8 pm mountain time....

[Y.L.]

Intro-ductionzzz

~isnt it amazing that this native kid rocks so well, drop ya best tracks and they not gon tell~


Killin' veteran American soldiers, with Viagra pills loaded from the ~holsters~ - oxygen tanks and life support - couldn't keep you alive long enough for this battle to be ~over~ {1}

I'ma give madness his props and spit ~non-vicious~, cause you know I like my bitches ~Raw and Delicious~ {2}

Bullets admire your back, I laugh at your ill ~assumptions~, force you ta suck my dick like it came with ~instructions~ {3}

if you was "fat" then im burning off ~calories~, this "mad" playa rides da bench wit da lowest ~salories~ {4}

check it like dis.......
you got a "wack" name "wack" game....ya think this fool ~cares~, i got his "wack" ass twisted up like a jamaican pube ~hair~ {5}

so twisted you leave me wit nothin else to do but rip you right outta this ~scene~, cuz you know you gettin fucked.....question is with or with out ~vasaline~ {6}

jus keep ~rippin n dissin~ the point you ~missin~, you need to sit down like bowwow n ~listen~ cuz you got no punches to be ~fistin~ {7}

i got you "shook"-dont forget "took" til ~eternity~, my spits are so tight even ya own "family" ~turn-to-me~ {8}

your not worth the "breath" to be spittin - but this battles what ya ~make-of-it~, you can call me "death" cuz i kill wack emcee's who lose battles like you form ~mistakes-n-shit~ {9}

i'll make you regret what ya "spit" cuz i dont show ~affection-to-these-tricks~, makin these people "shit" after they find out you get ~erections-from-seein-these-dicks~ {10}

yeah i be da one who fuckin ya mom......ya think she ~care?~, da fuck she does she tha one wit her ass in da ~air~ {11}

the only "madness" you got is the love you show for ~black-men~, you love em big to go deep in ya ~back-end~ {12}

finisher:

"mad" ya aint shit - thinking you ~lyrically minded~, "mad" you think you gon shredd but already ~lyrically-mine-did~

[Y.L.]

Hurry UP MAN!!!! where the hell is you????...................waiting.......you said 10 your time so i did....and you still havent posted.....WTF man....

[Mad Mike]

my comps fucked up..Im at a friends , I'll drop now..sorry bout that shit

[Y.L.]

kewl
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[Mad Mike]

Wow...Spit 10-12, My openin Punch will have ya mind swelled/
Face it ....No matter who he battles Vet Or Newb....Y.... L's (Loses)/
He wanted to Battle a Vet....I'ma give em' Wise Help......
Time Tells....W / exception of This Realm Cuz He don't Show Patience/
Battle's Vets to Get better...But shows no sign of Elevation/
You waisted ya Aces on the Newbs its time to fold,
you'll lose cuz I'm the 1st to battle u, who's beyond 9 yrs old/
His Rhymes r a joke, Played...Old.,Corny...Structures Jacked/
But I'm sure I Ain't the first Person to Notice this MuhFuckers Wack/
Man, I'll tear through you like nail's in Rubber Sacks /
as for the rhymes in my pad..Homie each is savored,
No lie Dogg, I've seen better structure on a clean piece of paper/
Fuck the Green Paper..I Rap to Breathe anger..
Stranger, Now you know I can rarely be beat/
Bitch,you waisted all that time typin to still be drown'd in defeat/


Ight some quick shit lets get these votes up........

[Laureate]

Y.L. You had a good verse....for cypher...maybe. No real punches, more jus talkin bout yourself, and that makin him suck ya dick one hurt you moren than him. Came with some played sex, gay jokes.
MM you had some decent punches and personals. You've elevated a lot. Still ahd some played lines, but you won anyway.
Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php? t=110310
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

[Y.L.]

Ight Heres the deal....
Check in...
Blind spit,
10-15 lines,
No feeding,
no hate votes,
no crew votes,
Post by 10 Tonite
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10 tonight man, wtf...dont take you that long mayne...