yo yo 10 - 16 lines.........no hate, d/r, all that shit..........check in due 45 min afta check in.......ill check in afta u then start keyin.....dont no show
pictureperfect2
LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1
yo yo 10 - 16 lines.........no hate, d/r, all that shit..........check in due 45 min afta check in.......ill check in afta u then start keyin.....dont no show
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Pictureperfect no more cuz u just got a loss/
You just anotha path that is easily crossed/
Why the fuck you have tupac as ur avatar wen u got no game man/
You live a thug life than why have high speed internet and broadband/
Just a rich as fag that wunts to be like the crowd/
Prolly goes to Harvard...making father proud/
Well bitch where im from we dont got dads n we provide fer our family/
Im tellin it real so i wont rhyme cuz i gotta express this to ya/
So stop posin dawg cuz u just aint "ThUg LiFe"/
Haha this cat wont have sex til he gets a wife
GOOD LUCK
Spittin rhymes inclined
to take u back in time
yo mom gives birth she say da child aint mine/
jus another verse I know it hurts
lazy fuck gave up before beginning the search/
so les fast forward to when u was a kid
and see how u was way back when/
u was funny looking as we look back
hooked ass beeck wit a hooked ass back
aww am I makin u sad
heleriosly ironic u sumin u never had
one stick this pussy bleedin
my dick he slurpin seaman
to go on I see no reason
beat me keep on dreamin
Lyrically definitly got this. No real challenge here. Picture had some tight metas and punches. Picture didn't really throw anything, more of a freestyle verse than a battle I think.
Please check this out, both of yall. Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084
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Lyrically Insane took this one easily, he came with nice structure and really good punches, "You live a thug life than why you have high speed internet and broadband"
that shit had me laughing, good job. Pictureperfect keep working at it, your lines were short and choppy. vote: LyricallyInsane1
hey guys please drop an honest vote, this kid talks shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243
"I'm posessed by Hip Hop's delivering spirit, and i fear it cuz my head is constantly scribbling lyrics"
-Benefit
aight...
LI... your structure prolly is wut i think killed you da most... i think you had da lyrics... but you really didn't catch da rythm of da flow... punches were ok.. not anything to stand out-ish.. overall not to bad tho...
out of 10 i give you 7.3-- <---structure--->
PP.. pretty good... i like how you tried to keep ppl reading with a lil intencity...... punches were a lil better... good structure.. easy to read and get your text style... good job..
out of 10 i give you an 8.3
Vote: Perfect
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Da blakest nigga dis side of da moon.
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Get Aktive Nigga...
-blakout-
uppin..........yo peep what blak woods had ta say if u votin.......sumone who actually understood a bit how i be flowin, and flow dro dat flow u thought was hot by dat doo, is not coo at all. fo real when u look at it, i'd be inbarrased makin a slam from someones computer, das jus gay.............uppin.......................
LI got this, but you two need to elevate a lot, both of you had a lot of things that didn't make sense, LI had more of a flow, and used more wordplay, and metas, but they didn't really make sense, i bet if you guys tried harder you could do a lot better, your flow was a little odd.
Both of your structures were fucked up.
Pic I thought was tied with creativity when he said the whole thing about the beginning of LI's life, but LI said: You live a thug life than why have high speed internet and broadband/
Just a rich as fag that wunts to be like the crowd/
Prolly goes to Harvard...making father proud/
Well bitch where im from we dont got dads n we provide fer our family/
So overall LI takes this, keep elevatin
Yo hit these battles, they didn't get enough votes, and have been going on for more than a week i think, so click on this link and plz vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109650
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108789
if u know how ta flow read mine over agian cus the whole thing flows "perfectely" so he aint beatin me in that catagory, and i appreciate your input, but lets get some cats who can actually vote, to get this thang closedandone .
..............uppin.............
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