.:FiorZ:. vs. skandalz18

[.:FiorZ:.]

Rules:
you spit first
no hata, crew, d/r votes
spit within 30 mins after chek in

peace

[skandalz18]

iight im here....so no regulation on the bars right?

[skandalz18]

yeah checkin in

[.:FiorZ:.]

yup, 10 lines. max..............

my bad.........

[skandalz18]

im given u no props, given u 100 percent disrespect
ill take shots, bullets from my tech get stuck in ya neck
ill sqeeze 5 in ya jersey
so ull be looken like Jason Kidd from New Jersey
i know ya boy dont wanna talk
ill blow off his legs so that bitch cant even walk
on the site theres no 1 wacker-then-u
MA Evil im white 2 but im still blacker-then-u
ill have u hit wit 10 from my mac 11
then 3 wit the tech and the gat is 7
ill have the brains of ya dudes-tossed just face it u-lost
ill kill ya crews-boss and make ya nose redder then rudolphs
take out my pistol and in ya body i be poppen-it theres no stoppen-this
i be droppen-hits, put my hand down ya throat and rip out ya fucken esoughagas
'Evils" gotta "direct hit" like he was a "sniper"
the only time u "ill" is wen i put u in the hospital
u beaten me or ne 1 in my crew, come on thats just impossible
ill smack u wit my shotty so u can really get a facial scar
u aint at my level u cant even face these bars
im a killer y u think im skandal
ill never have a boss ill always stay un-handled
enough wit dis im outa time
ill see you on the redline

[skandalz18]

yo are you gonna spit that shit ne time soon or what??c'mon you made the rules you should be able to do it within 30mins

[skandalz18]

yo man dont be a lil bitch and duck this shit eitha...hurry ur ass up you got 5 mins

[skandalz18]

yeah so what i went ova tha line limit...jus fucking go
you got 2 minutes

[skandalz18]

whateva you aint even worth mi time....fuckin wannabe...pc...

[.:FiorZ:.]

signin' In.....

i bin away man....................my bad...........
i sed 30 mins within chek in........

this is my chek in

[.:FiorZ:.]

Didn't i say 10 lines??......meh.......woteva

Quik Key

I Prescribe Hit's That Are Disconnectin' Ya Fists's
Cos Your Punches Are Useless' Like Playin' Hockey Without Tha Sticks
Ma "Username" Blows You Out, Cos I "Smoke Herb's" Like-You
Even If You Were A Subway Sandwich, I Still Wouldn't Bite-You (bite his lyrics)
Givin Me Shit Sayin' I Aint Worth Ya Time
I Burn Ya Rhymes Like An "Iron" Cos Im "Creasin'" At Ya Lines (creasin/laughin)
U Jus' A Wannabe Newbee, A Key Pushin' Geek
You Aint Ever Held A Mic, Your Career Jus Aint Meant To Be
Sit Back In Ya Seat, Dont Step To Me Or Your Gonna Regret
Cos I've Put Down More Cats Than A Motherfukin Vet (Vet/Animal Surgeon)

Vote Muthafukas Vote

[.:FiorZ:.]

yo cummon people.....................cum n vote.........

if a mod sees this, delete all but our chek ins and our verses plz......

uppin

[Freeman]

iight...

wack shit from skandalz... elevate man... dont talk about yourself with pre-written shit on here man... learn to battle...

Fiorz... you had some good punches... you stuck to the lines... lol... flow was on...

Skandalz... you sucked... dont talk about yourself man... flow was all over the place...

vote - Fiorz

OUT

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[Endeva.]

pretty one sided as far as i could see... punches go to Fiorz, harder hitten... and the verse was smoother... and more to the point.... without the self glorification.... so my vote=Fiorz
....return the favour

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

[Meters]

This was a pretty one-sided battle. Fiorz takes everything, even structure which he clearly wasn't focusing on. Other cat really has to elevate, talking about yourself is the death knell of any verse, no matter what the material is. It juist so happens that Fiorz also had the punches to back his verse up, he gets my vote.

Vote- Fiorz, repay the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109567