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Thread: 2nd song from "Unlimited Wisdom"-"Deliver me"

  1. January 27th, 2004, 08:36 AM #1
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    2nd song from "Unlimited Wisdom"-"Deliver me"

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109180
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    Deliver Me

    Verse 1

    I’m lost in action…Caught in a verbal Transaction
    Counter Productive times…Losing my sense to fiction
    Counter fiction…Fake ideas begin to ruin my mind
    I feel I’m caught behind…Ten steps behind sometimes
    That’s behind the leading pack…I feel I can’t compete
    When I try to win fair…People resort to hate and cheat
    Like rain and sleet…My soul begins to rain cold pain
    Where I was a fighter before…Now I’m tame and lame
    But the anger beings to grow…Spitting Blood from my soul
    Losing control…trying my hardest not to let go
    Of my minds Sanctuary…A place it can sit and rest
    Without resorting to Anger, Hate and Distress


    Chorus

    Deliver me from This evil That’s plaguing My thoughts
    I’m at an odds end…No longer Can I control My thoughts
    But my own Sanatorium keeps me living sane
    Til the day I perish away…And my memory no longer remains
    (X2)

    Verse 2

    My bloods running cold…A deep Scarlet river
    Running in my veins…To my heart it delivers
    A lease of life...The elixir that keeps it beating
    Keeps it humming away in the background...Keeps me living
    Keeps Me moving…Keeps me and My thoughts running Strong
    Keeps them Teasing me…Keeps them pushing me along
    Makes me want to succeed…Then makes me want to fail
    Keeps my brain ticking…Slow as the pace of a snail
    Like a mathematical equation…I’m hard to figure out
    And if my chapter ended now…I still wouldn’t be happy somehow
    Cos I strive to be more…Deep in my heart want to succeed
    And if I don’t get to the higher plain…Don’t matter, I’ll achieve

    Chorus

    Deliver me from This evil That’s plaguing My thoughts
    I’m at an odds end…No longer Can I control My thoughts
    But my own Sanatorium keeps me living sane
    Til the day I perish away…And my memory no longer remains
    Boom tick its Brix!

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  2. January 27th, 2004, 09:03 AM #2
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    thought, the first verse was decent, little bit of wordplay, a smooth flow and the content was ok, and feeling in it, but the second i didnt like the 'keeps' thing, didnt really match with the first verse...return the favour
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  3. January 27th, 2004, 11:37 AM #3
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    ta......just a concept I had bubblin bout....Thanx for the feedbak...
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  4. January 27th, 2004, 11:37 AM #4
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    Actually, I Said That The First Track Was The Best He Ever Lay Down But This Is Just As Tight.
    I Rekon He Has Equalled Himself.
    You Got A High Plato To Keep On Now Boi.

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  5. January 27th, 2004, 11:43 AM #5
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    cheers mate....maybe u'll be gud as me one day...jokes...
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  6. January 27th, 2004, 11:45 AM #6
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    i enjoyed it, anymore questions?
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  7. January 29th, 2004, 05:17 AM #7
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  9. March 16th, 2004, 05:28 PM #9
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    Good piece daz you came nice here.
    Good flow lyrics etc
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  10. March 18th, 2004, 06:14 AM #10
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    ta mate
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