10 lines
no feeding
no d/r, hate or crew votes
.iLL. spits first
peace and good luck
10 lines
no feeding
no d/r, hate or crew votes
.iLL. spits first
peace and good luck
checkin in
aight cool......... good luck and have fun............................................... ...............
~`~Intro~`~
This battle be the ~location~ of this faggots ~mutalation~ so here's the ~presentation~/
I'm the doc he's my ~patient~ and im in charge of this ~operation~/
~`~Dog Fight Begins~`~
Homie, this scientific and unspecific horrific lyrical exhibit/
is explicit by the minute cause my flow's prolific/
The only thing you 'stab' is ya meat with yur *utensils*/
your ammo's water, and u only 'pump lead' wit mechanical *pencils*/
Wogzta couldn't 'equal' my skillz if he was a 'Siamese twin' born wit me/
Hes been know to be compared to 50-
gay men in a sauna singin elvis presley/
~`~CloseR~`~
Masterful, supernatural attacks, tactical-planned 'n mathematical/
Grind your body into a pulp reminiscent of tuna casserole/
Kid must've read my battles the way he spits vocab
But "Thesaurus" was the only word I found in his notepad
My dexterity positions me as the martyr of rap
While he tries to blend in like Rednecks wearin' Rastafarian hats
Like horrible tracks, I present you with lots of issues
And then discard your existence like a box of tissues
Utilize your ears, I suggest you start listenin'
Cos I "drop lines" with more skill than proffesional fishermen
You think your hot like sulfuric acid but this battle's resolved
I'm gold... the one thing you can't hope to dissolve
nice spit .iLL.... good luck
uppin, thanks
uppin 2
lol........my god...heres the breakdown
Flow:both...
Stucutures:both...same
Punches:::mad punches from wogtza....not enough to be great but enough.
personals:some from ill. NO hate on that one
multis:ill..FUCKING SO MANY!
metas:ill...had more metas..
overall:ill...the multis....so fucking many....
hit up my attle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1126197
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699
^ i'll hit up your battles when you vote my friend... you have to pick who is better... not just say "theyre both ill"... peace
Ill had some nice multi's, and flow. But the punches were just aight. Wogsta had a good flow, and sum good punches. overall sum of ill's lines were played i think wogsta came more original. so my vote is wogsta
check my battle out.
upping for honest votes............................................. ....................................
.ll. had some nice metas and multis. Usually I dun like multis cause people throw em in there to sound cool, but ILL made them punches which is nice. Wogzta had a nice flow and structure, not too many good punches or metas but I give him creativity for some of his metas. Overall .Ill.
Please take the time to drop an honest vote here. Thanks guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109779
^ actually, ill had no multies at all... all his rhymes were internal, not multies.... but all my lines had 2-3 syllable rhyming except for the last 2... just letting you know
uppin 3 .. vote for this guys, and i vote for urs
Ill had good multis but Wogsta had good wordplay and had 2 good metaphores. The first being:
"Cos I "drop lines" with more skill than proffesional fishermen". He talks about line with the double meaning fo a fishermans lines.
And the other:
"You think your hot like sulfuric acid but this battle's resolved
I'm gold... the one thing you can't hope to dissolve". Here he suggests that even though ill were as hot as sulphuric acid, he would never come close to melting him as he is Gold.
Also his verse was more pleasing to the eye.
therefore my breakdown is:
Flow:wogsta
Metaphore:wogsta
multi:ill
Form:wogsta
Rhymesense:ill
Wogsta/Ill = 3/2
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