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Thread: Hip Hop Alias

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    Hip Hop Alias

    Hip Hop Alias

    Chorus twice

    Word up, The industry we didn’t suspect to succumb/
    Has been reduced to rubble thanks to you son/
    It has come, without warning or thoughts of advance/
    Its like tango with the enemy, the Devil shares the dance/
    Conscious heads know what we deserve of/
    Do unto others, without our respect or love/

    Check it, watch how kids get easily influenced/
    When they watch gangster idols purposely talk foolish/
    Speaking gats, and murder is there fashion and lingo/
    Fairytales, and dramas are what MTV Raps hosts/
    Not to excuse these artists, what’s the bargain/
    That a rapper can threaten to kill, but the charge gets pardoned/
    Look what has started, and television provides sanctuary/
    Praising false Gods while they put men into mortuaries/
    I speak now cause it’s a repetitive cycle/
    How they get away with it, two words, “My dough”/
    This is a title that MCs wear, deadly positions bestowed/
    Tupac to Big L, glamour mansion to clouds/
    And now they proud, sporting their bullet wounds/
    Laughing how 2 inches further, they be resting eternal in tombs/
    Nah, this isn’t about to decipher their intellect/
    But then again, toting nines and techs, is how he relieves stress/
    The theory of distorting your own mentality to cope/
    With the realities of life, rather work desk than sling coke/
    But then again, if you broke, times not fucking simple and easy/
    Striving and still can’t pay rent, the loan sharks patience squeazy/
    Listen to me, children adore these stories, another rags to riches/
    They cop a glock, jump other Mafia Boss, face left with stitches/

    Chorus twice

    The weapon is loaded, and the tip explodes profusely/
    Someone found another case, gang star trying not to lose g’s/
    Reign of terror ended in disaster, lead shells leave parka tattered/
    Crew battered, demise was inevitable, whatever, doesn’t matter/
    But lives get shattered, it revolves around music’s violent/
    Supported and applied at, by the Hip Hop worlds finest/
    It’s the kind that, drives Peace Corps to slow insanity/
    Fake alias, name robbery, this switch up that occurs bothers me/
    Though you were the baddest, yesterday this was your domain/
    Now some junkie repping the Streets of Main, begging for cocaine/
    Morphene and Peyote to stop the pain, without dignity/
    Black Jack, you’re the spade, the end cause by our negativity/
    You hear the Master resemble a crisis to the receiver/
    The Ceremony then makes the audience a believer/
    Dominate male figure, don’t look my way, gun cocks/
    Inspired rapper, gave up selling rocks, to end up like Tupac/
    What a shame…another brother deceased, never understand peace/
    And a passport to Notre Dame, instead of a gun in his jacket crease/

    Chorus twice…beat quiets.
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    Someone Reply To One Of My Open Mics That Are Recent. Uppin For Someone To Reply To This....typed It Up Today.
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    Yo frankly i thought this was good.

    Dominate male figure, don’t look my way, gun cocks/
    Inspired rapper, gave up selling rocks, to end up like Tupac/

    Nice line....Easy to read flowed very well and smoothly....Topic was nice i can see where your comin from.....Nice drop........Hit me up anytime wit your new work....Thanks for the feedback on my piece i ask if you ever have the time look up my other work......Good shit dawg....

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    Thanks for the reply...considering no one will give feeback..Uppin this for feeback....Comment or criticize...
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    Uppin for feedback.....Would like some comments, maybe even a breakdown? Would appreciate...Uppin...
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    HAHA....Uppin this again...I want more feeback...Seriously, I would appreciate if someone hit this up...I will return the favour.
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