Here's the rules:
10-15 lines
This is a BlindSpit
Verse's both due by tonight
No Crew/Hate/Dickrydin' votes. Aight!!!!
RiGaMorTiz
madman-doubleSS
Here's the rules:
10-15 lines
This is a BlindSpit
Verse's both due by tonight
No Crew/Hate/Dickrydin' votes. Aight!!!!
checkin.............due before.............Midnite
Deadline
ill prolly drop in a hour or 2...if i aint buzy..
pc good luk
checkinnnnnnn
Aight, here's my spit. Check it:
Yo, this kid's moms a bigger slut than the Playboy bunny, Sable/
I'm a full-blown legend while ya just a fuckin' fable/
Cause I'll chop more heads than that guy from Sleepy Hollow/
You don't know how to lead so just learn how to follow/
This kid's will wet his pants after a film by Wes Craven/
Yo,ya lyrics are a bigger joke than that show Thats So Raven/
You just another face in the crowd wit' ya average verse/
I'm gonna leave you lyin' on ya back, wit' ya face up in a hearse/
My flow is like magic, cause it'll leave you wit a curse/
Make ya life miserable, never gonna have a dime in ya purse/
Yo, I'll raise more hell than than Pinhead from Hellraiser/
My ryhmes are more advanced than a photon laser/
While you can't even work a needle, ya stupid crack-craiser/
You best back away from my lyric's cause they sting you like a taser/
Ya Entered the Battle thinkin you'd Dispose of me but Chose to be Ripped Fast..
Supposedly ya got Skill,I'm not Thrilled,I drop Ill and give ya Whip Lash..
Decapitate ya bitch Ass,once I Dispatch my Punches and leave ya Lid Twisted..
This kid Insisted to get Verbally Fisted,ya shoulda just Bit the shit that Chrit did..
ya had one shot but Missed It,Now ya Listed as another Victim of my Viscious Blows..
I'm so fuckin Cold my Lines'll Paralyze ya Mind and leave this Bitches Wishes Froze..
with Descriptive flows,
its my Mission,to cause a Cllision and seperate ya Neck an Head
Super Impsin This Foe, Shoe em The Best,an Disconnect his Intellect instead..
Collect ya dreads, once I Peel ya Cap back so far It reveals Ya Spine
Leave a Trail Of Mad Weak Mc's. When I Proceed To Rhyme Its like Im Squeezin a 9
uppin /.///////////./////////////////////////////.
Leave a link ill hit it up
Punches: Riga (they hit more than doubless's because they seemed to have more thought and didn't seem so vauge)
Multies: Riga (the few that were in this battle riga had the majority of them)
Vocab: Riga (then ending of all of Double's lines had the same things except for one or two letters, sable fable, hollow follow, craven raven, ect.)
Wordplay:nothing special enough for either of you to take this
Metaphores: Double ss (for how simple his verse was it did have some meaphores in it)
Vote: Rigamortiz
im dope
Rigamortiz got this shit with better punches..and creativity..structure was off tho..but it didnt totally fuck up his flow..matter of fact..fuck explaining this shit..this whole shit was 1 sided..Riga completely sonned this herb..I mean..what the fuck was Madman spitiing?..it was total garage..my advice to him is to stop rapping..
my vote~Rigamortiz
Punches: Riga
Multies: Riga
Vocab: Riga
Wordplay:Riga
Metaphores: Neither
Vote: Rigamortiz
left my honest vote.....now hit this up for me....1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109545
u no how to poll vote..cuz u cant.....but all good
ill peep ya link now...
Honest votes..
uppin################2
my vote is rig easy.........................................
this one is luminary quite easily....
punchlines, not disputed... luminary... madness had a few good ones but lum's were consistent and harder hitting...
vocabulary goes to luminary... madness had some good shit towards the end with "photon laser" etc., but lum had good vocab through out...
flow goes to madness... his structure was more even and easier to read, and he flowed better...
multies goes to luminary... madness had no multis but luminary had a few 2-3 syllable rhymes... and all of them worked as punches
vote = luminary (rigamortiz)
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madman - good structure.........flow is ok...........vocab is pretty basic........some good multis.......wordplay is ok........i was feelin some of the punches, some were mad wack though........ok personals.......
riga - structure is wack.......flow fell off.......vocab is pretty good.........multis were tight......wordplay was ill.........punches hit hard.........no personals......
conclusion - riga takes this in multis, wordplay and punches so he gets my vote......
VOTE - RIGAMORTIZ
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iight...
wtf was SS spittin? that was wack man... elevate please... like Dixie said... leave rappin is ur other choice if you dont wana elevate...
neway...
Text (Riga)... had some good punches in there... flow was ok, structure was off... but didnt affect ur flow that much...
vote - text
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