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Thread: Corrupted Visions: This Is My Mission

  1. #1

    Corrupted Visions: This Is My Mission

    Check It.........

    I'm in position to have you listen so this is my mission
    Leave mc's missin cuz I chrissin every single division
    Takin body parts an makin'em better call me a mortician
    I work wit the dead broke and give'em a pot to piss in
    Helpin others be enrichen, black, white, spic or rican
    Wealthless brother victims, backs tight ripped & bitten
    Tracks I write never skippen when the musics riffen
    If this was a football game you kno my D 4ever bliztin
    I'll never let up the pressure less I get up and bless ya
    First words impressed ya, letters of bullets adress ya
    Can't dodge my verbal agression, I got herbal discretion
    Legal ability to smoke weed I know...aint it depressin?
    You wish for my position while I sit and watch u wishin
    You spit to wash the dishes the worlds sick & awfully visious
    Fuckin quick an often bitches they get quickly out my kitchen
    Evict me out the riches pick me giftless or quit ya bitchin
    Swift wit Smithon, put'em to ya head is a depressin decision
    But the Wesson is itchin, but I'm only oppressin the twitchin
    I get to rippin, the whole industry's nothin you heard me
    Head a weapon, the dust trees snuffin your whole clergy
    Your whole crew, can do absolutely nothin to save you
    You a brave dude, but my gurl set you up and played you
    Cuz you can't come close to me, like I was the President
    See nobody's skills matchin' me, and that's shits evident
    I ravage brains when my havoc rains in savage pain
    Stabbin frames, get the picture? u can have the game
    I'm out, wit knock outs no doubt, I stop shout & sprout
    Revolve about pout, sore fuckin loser I drop out ur snout
    Taking Over Rb Verbally ....
    You Think You Can Murder Me ...?

    Step Up ...
    Get Put Down ...


    Audio Record....
    4-0-1


    -[- Corrupted Visions -]-

  2. #2
    Induelz
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    .. Strucutre Wuz Bangin ..
    .. Good Concept ..
    .. Nice Useage Of Vocab ..
    .. Liked The Creativity ..
    .. One Negative Point ..
    .. Wuz The Repetive Use ..
    .. Of Same Kinda Lines ..
    .. Other Than That It Wuz Tight ..
    .. 8.4/10 ..

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    the medicine man
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    some nice lines, an some average, their were points were it got boring, but most of the way through it was sick!!!


    nice vocab, an some aiight immagery!!

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    leave feed and a link i'll return it


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    ..Good vocab..good imagery...flow was real nice..and yes it was dull at times..but overall a pretty good piece..(Stick to battle...)

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