Tek Verse Weezy Snypz

[Solgooberdier]

punches - tek
personals - tek
flow - tek
creativity - tek
flow - tek


OVERALL - tek
Great work, far better than Snypes
Vote-Tek

[Its Illytizzle!™]

uppn this.. yo an thanx a lot Rookie.. real funny.

[OutCome]

Ya' career took a dive off the deep end, there's no reason to battle you-
Claimin' you wear a vest, but walk on the shallow end of the talent pool--
heh, opening is ok, good meta in there punch could be a little more directed but good line.
And maybe we should post this on a different site, cause RB likes me-
Dawg, I'd get more replies on a sig test, then you do on an open mic peice--
good follow, nice concept.. expecting a better flow from it, but good punch.. setup could have came off better
Lessons are cruel, ya' endin' up with ya' brain matter spread on ya' tooth-
I'll throw ya neck in a noose, and send your medics out on stretchers with you--
setup could have been a little more clear as well as connected better... punch isnt that hard
Not to mention ya punches, so watch this dumb kid get kicked in the stomach-
Crippled in public, and left with his legs staple stitched to his crutches--
thats the type of flow im talkin bout, not that strong as a directed punch but good flow
I'll stand on ya' block, with hands on mah glock, and flowz that'll dismantle ya knot-The only way you hittin the 'big time' is boxin' wit 'grandfather clocks'--
setup was more of a filler ta me, follow through was an alright punch, the meta's good
But I guess you're fit for tha' comp, I punch key's and I landed a few-
Woah!! easy faggot.. I'm only grabbin' ya' ass to hand it to you--
flow could have been worked out better, good line though
I'd run through ya' crew, now you next on mah list, so wit clout I blast-
Make you bite da' bullet, til there's nothin' but lead comin' out ya' ass--
nice line... follow through was better than your set up though...
This shits more then a mismatch, you're under armed so your holsters fit-
Ya' rap career is like a 'limo wit no driver', you got nothin' to 'Chaffeur'(Show For) it--
good concept. setup need to be a little better i thought
Weezy, you're just an act, you're not worth mah time. Imma target a sucker punch-
I'll 'plant' 'left and right hooks', and give you a whole 'harvest' of 'uppercuts'--
i woulda cut whole, to save the flow a little. Punch could have been better
Tek got more 'Def Jams' than the 'hearing' impaired on 'busy streets'-
Imma replace ya' 'vital organs' wit a 'Turnip', so ya heart don't miss a 'beat'--
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ending isnt bad, punch was alright, liking both your setup and follow through.

Good verse, had some good punchs, nice metas n such,. flow wasnt bad, could have used a multi or two more oveall a good piece.




Watch as i Break you down like im digestin' Your mind/
All my merkin's get a turn and your just next in line/
good connect with your opening, although the punch could have been harder
Tek...what chu know about a gun on your waist/
Only bullets that you droppin are the ones on your face/
i thought the follow through was gunna be a bit more.. your setup started nice though
Speak what youll Actually do Not what chu thinkin' will happen'/
Get you mad after this little freestyle im tappin'/
again good setup, but the follow through was hitting with the punch
Tek...Listen up you'll never pose a threat/
...You need to give it up and stop postin' threads//
punch is weak, no real explanation in it but still pretty good direction
your jus a.. open target For the missles To Launch kid //
Rhymes Like your Bullets blank so they not posin' a caution/
ok line.. good concept with your meta, the punch wasnt to hard though
Half way therre and excuse the accent/
Tek couldnt win roses at a ulgy pagent/
i see what you were trying for, but you lost flow, and werent clear enough on your line good attemp
He Gotta to check himself and really recognize/
Bang yourself..oh..you can use the "tek" to die/
ok personal, i see the meta you were shootin at
You tellin' jokes in your lyrics we know whos the clown/
i told this nigga he "wait"to much he try losin' pounds/
the setup could have flowed with the follow through a little better, punch wasnt that hard
my young bulls lit his back up givin' him "flash back"/
he got played in school thats how he got labeled class act/
good line, could have been more directed
as i.. finish it off i'll just diminish him all/
light work gets sent to "born to kill" to finish him off/
ending was ok, not much of a punch there

You had an ok verse but it sort of seemed a generic.. you had a littl e bit better direction i think, however your punchs and metaphor/wordlay concepts werent that hard hittening, lack a little creativity...

Vote- tek
came with better punchs, his metaphor style seemed to have a little more thought put into it

[Its Illytizzle!™]

Now thas a breakdown! ^^^ -applauds-

Uppn this..

[Hennessy.]

breakdown~
metta-tek
multies-tie
structure-tie
flow-weezy
punches-tek
effort-tie
overall-tek
vote-tek
nuff stated
peeps check dis battle dont sleep on it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...31#post1111631

[Its Illytizzle!™]

There's only one vote for Weezy yet the poll reads 2.. an a couple of my votes need pollin.. if a mod's passin thru would u b so kind.. much appreciated.