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}life after deah{
gl to both...droping now
.:FreemaN:.
TheProphet777
12 lines max. Topic is:
}life after deah{
gl to both...droping now
shit..i gotta go for now...ill drop later....................
iight... im bk online now...
lets do this...
good luck to both...
dropping soon...
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Forgone conclusions, misread lives, dropped out souls
Strived for nothin, wasted time, achieved no goals
Then comes the end of life, followed by the after-life
Ended by a knife, glorious to end a life of strife
Cindred spirit roam the country, searchin forever more
A lifetime of containment, now its yearning to explore
No more being held down, captured by shackles and chains
The soul lasts forever, yet the body has no remains
The body is left to rot, as the spirit rises out
Eager to get away, roam free, independant to run about
It is said that a spirit comes back to those that it loved
Yet how can a spirit come back to earth...
... if in life it was always unloved
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aight yo here it is..... just did it now...
I was shot...put out my misery for good/
death was over my shoulders...i felt the cold...i knew i could/
now im walking as a spirit with no place to return but only gods time/
walk into the entrance of the gates of heaven...jesus sits there with pride/
Smiles at me says i have done well in my life for only him and the holy.ghost/
Though my death was pain and only hardships..only jesus said i was dope/
Who should have known...i found out jesus was talking black/
"what up gee!"/and gave me a hit on the back/
i said to him"i died arent i suppposed to get judged?"/
Jesus replied back"fuck nah dawg...This is heaven bitch..We roll in dubbs"/
I looked at jesus wit a ackward smile.....and then i started to front.../
Jesus said"man sit the fuck down and come help me roll this blunt!"/
hope yall like....
uppin this shit yo....gl to both..........................
uppin this shit yo................................2nd up..................
YO THAT SHIT WAS HOT....PO PROPHET TOOK THIS...HE MADE ME LAUGH...AND GAVE SOME CHARISMA TO GOD..AND LIFE AFTER DEATH....INSTEAD OF MAKIN IT SEEM LIKE ITS THE WORST THING TO DIE.....BUT GOOD SHIT FOR BOTH.........
VOTE-PROPHET
NOW I LAID MY OPINION....DUE THE SAME FOR ME MY BATLE LINKS ARE BELOW
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=jAY-nOVA
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=jAY-nOVA
i cant vote as im a crew member but this shit was close and i liked both verses but i tink Free took this 1............nice battle both yas but like i sed no poll vote
nice battle but as^^ said.....prophet took dis
punches: prophet
structure: free
voc: free
humour: proph
vote: prophet
no hate.....or a d/r.....dis iz a tru vote
one
hit dis battle up plz....it bout 2 close
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107625
omg... prophet... as im sure you'll agree...
Killer Emcee cant vote on topicals...
'punches: prophet'...
punches in a topical!?!? what the fuck?
vote being removed... id rather you win fair and square as im sure you'll agree...
uppin #1
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yo....srry bout dat.....i look like a lozer but wa iz a topical battle??????
can u plze tell me so i dun feel dumb da next time???....lol
srryyy yall....now dat i noe wa a topical iz....id say dat freeman won...
hiz shyt gave me a good image in mah head.....n let me focus on da topic.....but prophetz waz ite...urz focused more on dialogue....not on imagery....good battle.....srry bout da vote b4...i had no idea wa a topical waz...i waz thinkin dat yall waz ritin bout each otha n how yall wuld die or sumshyt (itz confuzing)..srry bout dat doe
but mah real vote goez 2 freeman for creativity and good imagery.....
no hate.....one
Your vote is gone since you flipflopped from the two battlers.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 20th, 2004 at 09:03 PM
n im very sorry 2 free post but u mind hittin dis battle up wit an honest vote??
thnxx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107625
^^ haha dumbass, well neway, i wont poll but i feel frees was deeper on sum real shit
and prophets was funny, creative, and also on topic
both were good, and every battle i vote on, the funniest wins (skill also counts but if its close), thats just me, i got a big sense of humour, and i aint voting cus hes my crew leader, but for the simple fact that sometimes people make topicals to complex, and not everyone understand them fully,
i wont poll this vote but my vote goes to prophet
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