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    Drugs in America

    HOOK:
    They fight a war but knock on the wrong door
    they ignore what we as a country stand for
    The DEA is fucked up, and dare is a failure
    so stand the fuck up and lets go to war

    you can get denied aid for education if charged for drugs
    might as well pull out the rug and let em fall into a slug
    tell us to plug up and say nose-candy is the wrong term for coke
    let this fact soak in, 1.2 ppl die a year from snortin
    they must be jokin, and a person dies every 3 years from usin crack for tokin
    they used percentage as a shock tactic, but for the smart its anticlimactic
    cause we know facts are what seperate truth from fiction
    then again we have convinctions because of what people do for addiction
    then brought into the realization that pot isnt destroying our civilization
    it possesses no aspects to digress it, how come it isnt legit
    you must admit its better than alchol, thats why i dont get the split
    seems fit to take a hit but im currently being charged so im going to fuckin lose it!

    HOOK:
    They fight a war but knock on the wrong door
    they ignore what we as a country stand for
    The DEA is fucked up, and dare is a failure
    so stand the fuck up and lets go to war

    mabye give these kids a dose of dare, then they'll care and probably dare to try drugs
    cause you gave em the incentive to try it, then tell em they could make money as thugs
    The DEA puts guns in the hands of little ones
    then shows em raves and tells em why people think drugs are fun
    they have outdone themselves, then procede to ask for more wealth
    they're not concerned with health, they're mission is currently in stealth
    but we know whats up, we've only begun to fill up the cup
    that will inevidably destroy our rights and fuck our country up
    their laws are a result of flaws and meant to draw us into an economic pause
    because lobbiest and dirty polititions have there paws in everything we try to withdraw
    come on, tug on there shoulder a lil more, we'll open the door and let em explore
    disguise the truth no more and accept what you are responsible for

    HOOK:
    They fight a war but knock on the wrong door
    they ignore what we as a country stand for
    the DEA is fucked up, and dare is a failure
    so stand the fuck up and lets go to war


    The DEA is evil, this is just sick
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    Yo thats ill. Something different. Havent read really somethin like this. I like the fact how this shit is so positive but not in the same way. Structure was a lil off for me but good. i felt it. shit was ill!

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    uppin for feedback
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    Yo good read here,did a peice bout this shit a while back i'll let u read if u want jus pm me dawg,good vocab,flow was descent,some wordplay,message was clear,good imagery,good peice.

    P.S Hit mine up if you can.

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    ..Decent piece..I actullay enjoyed reading this...good content..good flow...good wordplay..keep up..

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    yo thx for uppin my piece, ill check yours out tonight or early tommorow
    still uppin for feedback!
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    Uppin for feedback

    uppin for feed, dont sleep
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    Dont sleep, still uppin for feedback
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    this was sum ill shit, i loved this i havent read sumin like this eva .....that shit was off tha hook

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    damn those were some i'll lyrics
    shit just flowed 2 gether nice job man
    got so many memories 2 call apon
    make up rap that sounds like a nightmare but it was a day of my life

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    thx for the replies, u guys check out the link at the bottom of the piece? its a kid dressed up by the DEA in raid equipment... now that shits sick!
    anyways.. still uppin for feed
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    thought this was pretty good... followed a good scheme that kept the flow going, maybe a couple of places could'a been carried further, i prefere the second verse to the first it had more feeling in it, and it followed the first ok,... all in all pretty decent drop, not keen on the hook tho, i jus prefer them a bit longer, but there always hard to judge unless you know how they go...so...
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    u AINT GOT NOTHIN ON ME man
    if u think u do battle me

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    U got somethin let me her somethin
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    Ahah!

    Quote Originally Posted by Slider
    u AINT GOT NOTHIN ON ME man
    if u think u do battle me
    ahah! this motha fucker is goin up into peoples threads and postin this garbage free postin shit.. hollerin out for battles? well let me do the honor to roast this bitch... Yo slider, ill battle you.. i already started the thread: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108793 tho i have a feelin u wont show..
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