Blade!

[Illus']

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[Illus']

Im only going to upp this a couple of times and say don't sleep or be lazy..

Upppppppin..

[¤KiNgPiN¤]

dat was good..but kinda long lol, interestin shit and ya got into some detail for some of it,over itz good

[Illus']

Thanks for response...
Yes I like to go into detial..especially when it comes to hurt suffering or violence...it's a venting process...

Uppin though I think this piece should get more reviews more input..
would be appreciated..

[Penskills]

..this was very nice....very emotional???..anyway..I enjoyed your content..everything flowed very well..good vocab..good scheme..simply..good piece..this shouldn't be slept on...peace...

~Click on free stuff!!!

[Illus']

Thanks bro...
the input helps me out a lot
Clicking on free stuff...

Oh yes this was very emotional

[Induelz]

My Nigga thiz wuz Tight
this line wuz juzt nasty
leaving your facial expression open,without physical, a sight of an Omen
an individual of six senses, gets shredded with a Onimusha Ninja's weapon.

Upping This Piece its hott..

[Figure Of Speech]

If You Call This Emotional All You Wrote about was killing ppl with your sword...I guess it was ok not something I would write but interresting in it's own little way...it flow'd pretty well in the beginning but when i started reading it most of it didn't rhyme so i'd say 4/10

[Illus']

Thanks for the input..

and not to confuse the readers...it is emotional

Put it this way I lost someone I had a serious crush on..
And the best way I vent is with hitting something or
Scripting violence..think of my Blade as my Rage being
Released…whoever has read my pass drops knows where
I am coming from…try to picture the Blade as me…with
A soul twist..