Practice for me, might lose, but hey I need the practice.
10 Lines
No crew, hate, d/r votes.
No feeding.
No biting.
Etc...
Your spit first.
Good luck to ya man.
roux
AJ
Practice for me, might lose, but hey I need the practice.
10 Lines
No crew, hate, d/r votes.
No feeding.
No biting.
Etc...
Your spit first.
Good luck to ya man.
all right, it's been a while, here goes....
take this challenge like it's your lunch money//
you wanna battle the roux now that's funny
i handle mine, it's a must you handle yours//
send you home with diaper rash in pampers and damaged drawers
my vocab is like double d titties, in need of reduction//
my spit so fat it's a candidate for lyposuction, punch you with it and you cease to function
you's a sissy but ya claim to be "straight"//
but i know for a fact last night a mexican queen touched your prostate
that's all, that's it, so hurry up and get back to me//
you just got worked like a Korean boy in a Nike factory
"Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
-T. Armstrong
Alright man, I will drop in a minute, nice drop.
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O my god, R U serious, X marks the spot of illiteracy
Ya sig looks like an article from 3rd World Conspiricy
Observe these lyrics in the void that stares back...
Try to read ya sig kid, bet ya have a heart attack
He's just a nothing and will never be anything more
Ya mom's got a step up, she the main street whore
This kid could spit with bitten rhymes and still lose
He should bite from Av so the bit lyrics could be x2
He is still useing // no wonder you got 9 losses...
He thinks about this in his sleep he turns and tosses
Like I said I am just getting started, don't expeect much.
Votes are very much welcome, and if you don't understand
the punchse he and I threw then please don't vote.
Easy match to judge, newer people should learn how much a clean structure helps the flow and message of your verse. For this reason and also because of personals, better punches, and an overall better verse my vote goes to AJ. My only advice would be to come harder at certain points, like when you started talking about 'the void' it was a little poetry-ish. However, liked the punch that came after that set-up. Nice job guys, drop a vote if you have the time
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107574
werd aj gets this his punches were much more consistent,
with a nice structure and better flow,
roux you gotta structure ur verse differently man....look at aj'salos harder punches man,
plz return the favor http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107574 thx...............pz
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Already voted on ya battle with Meters K, I just dropped a link over there, kind of funny if you think about it.
1st Uppin For Some Votes...
Come on people lets get some votes in here, don't sleep on this.
2nd Uppin for some votes.
Drop your links and your battles will be vote on by us. Thanks...
Come on people, are K and Meters the only ones that are going to vote, don't be so selfish, vote on my battle and I will vote on yours, easy as that.
3rd Upp For Some Votes
i'd vote AJ if i could. Better flow. Liked the sig hit. Roux had some good hits too, but I give edge to a flow.
i think this was 1 sided battle. AJ straight killed this shit. roux, you came weak as fuck to me, u need to put better punches and personals. aj you took this cuz of flow, punches, and structure. i liked your verse, you good, try out for complex, link in my sig aihgT?
PUnches= aj
personals- aj
flow- aj
wordplay= aj
vote= aj, good battle, props to both, but roux, elevate
hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106323
very easy one to pick here....
AJ win this hands down.....better structure-punches-personals-wordplay-and meti4's....
I never heard of AJ before....maybe its a name switch.....but u are pretty good..
The other cat didnt stand a chance.....he was a tru newbie...wit style and delivery..
vote-AJ
^..Basically that.
AJ, basically no newbie.. or he's doing a good job not to look like one..
Better punches..structure everything.. just not herbish..
Nothing great.. & momma lines are a no - no..
But you still take this with a tremendous difference. merkjob..
vote AJ
Witty Unpredicatable Talent And Natural Game
My pokemon brings all the nerds to the yard, and there like "Do you wanna trade cards?" Damn Right lets trade some cards, I'll trade you, but not my charizard.
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