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  1. January 14th, 2004, 08:05 PM #1
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    Who Am I

    My song...i got my sister on the hook

    http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...ID=602961&q=Hi -Hi-Fi

    http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...ID=602961&q=Lo -Lo-Fi


    i need some feedback people

    Thank You. Much Appriciated
    Peace
  2. January 14th, 2004, 10:23 PM #2
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    that girl sings good... flow was nice, sounds like u readin off of paper though.. its nice..

    n return the favor:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106350
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  3. January 14th, 2004, 10:57 PM #3
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    Hmm listen and first off the beat sounds like the begining of Nelly, I was expecting him to start yelling "I AM # 1" but I knew no on would be gay enuff to rock a nelly beat lol

    but yea man ur sister gots skills .. ur Flow is ill, try to pronoucing ur words just a lil better .. it was good just a lil were slurred, and then ur flow kinda got boring .. its like u spit a couple lines .. then breath spit a couple more then breath .. if u were to of switched it up this would of been flawless.

    Over All good drop man
    yo return the Fav I need some Fresh ears on my shit
  4. January 15th, 2004, 12:10 AM #4
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    WTF... you 2 are the 1st to give me a negative reply out of like 60....fall back and learn rap

    i know i might of went a little to fast and harder to understand what i said but you can still make it out if you actually listen to lyrics and not the beat.

    Peace
  5. January 15th, 2004, 01:35 AM #5
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    naw you aint go to fast man, mad tight shit for real, keep it up no doubt man, how old are you man?
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  6. January 15th, 2004, 08:05 AM #6
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    thanks for your feedback... oh and im 18
  7. January 16th, 2004, 06:45 AM #7
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    More feedback please...common people dont sleep
  8. January 16th, 2004, 11:35 AM #8
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    ur sis is good. the beats all right. over all it's real good.
  9. January 16th, 2004, 03:02 PM #9
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    Listenin'...
    ... Beat Is Iight...
    Her Vocals Are Iight...
    ... Nuffin' Special...
    You Sound Funny When You Talk...
    ... Lyrics Are Borin'...
    Quality Is Coo'...
    ... Missin' Emotion...
    Flow Is Coo' Too...
    ... 6/10...

    - Jay-O
  10. January 17th, 2004, 02:20 AM #10
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  11. January 17th, 2004, 03:59 AM #11
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    I liked this track, the production was nice. I really was feeling the female's voice, it was errie in a sense. I like your flow, your voice is distinct, I enjoyed the listen. Good drop!
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  12. January 17th, 2004, 11:14 AM #12
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    The lyrics were pretty dope..
    Your sister has a very nice voice it flowed with the beat..
    Nice deep and enjoyable..
    kinda different from my tracks I usually spit about violence
    My Rage type ish...
    anyways it's different to me..the hook like i said is real good..

    Great job fam stay up...
  13. January 17th, 2004, 04:07 PM #13
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    Thank You...i really appriciate the feedback from those who have replied...More would also help

    Thank You.
    Peace.
  14. January 17th, 2004, 04:42 PM #14
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    we got our subby go check in you cock!

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    New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz

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  15. January 22nd, 2004, 07:00 PM #15
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    ^^^Watch your mouth kid.^^^...still need more feedback peeps
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