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he spits first....
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fro-z
osiruz
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Fro-Z chekkin in.... I'll spit in a little, bit~ gotta finish a paper
Bitch thinks he could battle me, ho keep dreamin
my dicks like a ship in ya mouth, ya tounge tries to battle "seamen"
yall ready bit off more den u could chew, bitch gotta mouth full
caught u tryin to pocket my ballz, but not in da game pool
speakin of games in dis one im a hornet
if u a dude wit a durty ass osiruz would like to storm it
sting u wit my flo, hit u wit my punches
dis white boy kill cats like u by da bunches
buncha crunches, when im snappin ribs on ya body frame
ill cum in ya mouth like i never was potty trained
Fuck doin it fa money I'll do it fa free
beat ya ass, let ya blood run down onto ya keyz!
Its wateva~~ Newbie style
Spit somethin
cmon dawg, chek in or sumthin!!!!!! u need to drop so we can get this rated
is he a no show, damn dawg this ma first battle, u need to drop wit a quickness
heres my fuck you:
you only froze cause iam spitting cold-rhymes
with raw-nines that your carcass is sawed-by
iam so-nice, hit so hard your left a cadaver and your soul-flies!!!
fuckit that was nothing...you mother fuckers wanna see intertainment?
i'll spit sick quick rips that rip quick then i'll flip spits
listen kid you coudnt "drop punches" with slit-wrists!.....its so true!
fuck concepts iam not trying and i got this on lock-see!
checking froze's chin like facial autopsy!!!
you aint gainin-wins, cause i bring the pain-so-quick
your rhymes are ass but you still aint-the-shit!!!!
upping for some votes.....all favors will be returned....
uppin 4 votez please so we can close dis battle...
My vote goes 2 osiruz(not a dickride or hate vote) I juss think that he had betta punches and since it was pretty even he came away wit it in that one category, VOTE=Osiruz, please hit up this battle since I took time on your battle to vote on it, Please Vote PLEASE VOTE, http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108019
Yo, here's how I see this...
fro-z, not a bad verse.. definitely needs to elevate some. u had alright flow. punches could get a little stronger. My vote goes to Osiruz on this battle... he just took you out dude. He killed you in the 2nd part of his verse, madd multis I was loving it. Nice flow. All around alright battle, but osiruz took this one. (entertainment- spelled with an E btw =P)
vote- osiruz
Return the favor, honest vote this please. Gettin slept on real bad.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266
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I can't poll yet. I'm still some posts short. Don't worry, I don't see how u can't get this one in my mind. Sorry (this isn't a free post, I posted couple posts up)
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fro got this better punches but structure was acked but harder hitting nice..
my vote-FRO
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Yea, this battle was pretty close... but Os did come stronger.
Fro- I didn't really like all the penis references, and most of them were played anyway. Your other punches were too net-gangster, like "snappin ribs on ya body frame". Still, you've got some skills so stick with it.
Os- intertainment, lol! Anyway, weak beginning, but it got good by the end. "listen kid you coudnt "drop punches" with slit-wrists"- odd way of approaching it, but it was a good line. Basically you slayed him with the last 3 bars.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108289 - Thanks
this was a one sided battle
froz - good structure........flow was pretty good.........vocab was pretty basic.........no good multis.......wordplay was weak.........ya punches werent very good.........no good personals.......
osiuriz - good structure........flow was on target........vocab was tight........multis were ill as hell.......wordplay was tight........punches hit hard........good personal
conclusion - osiuriz takes this wit flow, vocab, multis, wordplay, punches, and personals so he gets my vote
VOTE - OSIURIZ
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108159
thanx........
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