Kaos Theory |vs| B.I.Detained

[Kaos Theory]

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Blind spits
Normal rules
Spit 30 mins after we both check in...

[Mr.W.Rong]

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[Kaos Theory]

If you don't get punches.. you better not vote..

He's got realialty detained.. living fairy tales.. just straight fiction
Seriously..
Kid you're tha wackest head on RB since that faggot named Brixton
Told B.I. to drop his verse.. Exept his shit slipped and fell to tha rug
Thats funny.. I didn't know there was any thugs who lived in Belzabub
Related to Irish?
Cuz I ain't talking deaths of leprachauns.. when I say I killed his luck
Needed a refill on talent..so he came to me..but rejected his Phil Me Up
Now I'm telling you
....ya haven't listened to shit..till ya heard what he's content with in life
He even volunteers to help out tha peasantry.. And B.I's still not nice
Couldn't come thick.. with punches that stick.. If He spit a cup of syrup
After all..what kinda of flow do you expect from a homo who lives in Europe


Please explain votes......g/l....this should be good

[Mr.W.Rong]

Walking Through Bars?? Admitting Pre-Adolescent Punks into Drink Now?
that's gotta be the only for ya to Stroll in a Bar..& not get Knocked Out
tell me How!!..you can be Theoretical...& still be stuck in Fuked up Kaos
you got so many Victories..& you still fail to Produce a Respectable Loss
to a Counterpart of Quality..Fag is so Poor he's Rejected from the Street
you're ass could be fucking Dr.Dre..yet you still wouldnt be able to Beat
Kaos Battles Represent Sleep..20 hits of Valium couldn't give them Life
see the only Sharpness you'll be Wielding is a Defenceless Butter Knife
wot Are you Like?? from First View you a Fake-Faker uppin his Record
"For all the Herb Murders I commited"..*Kaos*..I Confess & Regret-Lord

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[Mr.W.Rong]

Pm Axe n get him to move it pz
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Moved to Elevated.
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[Mr.W.Rong]

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He's got realialty detained.. living fairy tales.. just straight fiction
Seriously..
Kid you're tha wackest head on RB since that faggot named Brixton
Told B.I. to drop his verse.. Exept his shit slipped and fell to tha rug
Thats funny.. I didn't know there was any thugs who lived in Belzabub
Related to Irish?
Cuz I ain't talking deaths of leprachauns.. when I say I killed his luck
Needed a refill on talent..so he came to me..but rejected his Phil Me Up
Now I'm telling you
....ya haven't listened to shit..till ya heard what he's content with in life
He even volunteers to help out tha peasantry.. And B.I's still not nice
Couldn't come thick.. with punches that stick.. If He spit a cup of syrup
After all..what kinda of flow do you expect from a homo who lives in Europe
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9/10 nice verse but structure was off or it would of been a 10/10
aight overall nice punches and personals,aight werdplay cuz structure was off
which effected rymescene a little,pretty decent opener and closer
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Walking Through Bars?? Admitting Pre-Adolescent Punks into Drink Now?
that's gotta be the only for ya to Stroll in a Bar..& not get Knocked Out
tell me How!!..you can be Theoretical...& still be stuck in Fuked up Kaos
you got so many Victories..& you still fail to Produce a Respectable Loss
to a Counterpart of Quality..Fag is so Poor he's Rejected from the Street
you're ass could be fucking Dr.Dre..yet you still wouldnt be able to Beat
Kaos Battles Represent Sleep..20 hits of Valium couldn't give them Life
see the only Sharpness you'll be Wielding is a Defenceless Butter Knife
wot Are you Like?? from First View you a Fake-Faker uppin his Record
"For all the Herb Murders I commited"..*Kaos*..I Confess & Regret-Lord
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this was nice,easy to read,flowing werdplay good structure
good punches and personals,opener and closer were creative
overall 10/10,cuz it was a well approached battle verse
vote/B.I. Detained

[Kaos Theory]

Don't vote if you don't get tha punches.....

I need to breakdown or some shit for tha ppl who don't know

BI Detained aka Brixton aka Phil M Up

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Kao Theory's verse...


If you don't get punches.. you better not vote..

He's got realialty detained.. living fairy tales.. just straight fiction
Seriously..
^^^not such a good opener could of been better...4/10
Kid you're tha wackest head on RB since that faggot named Brixton
Told B.I. to drop his verse.. Exept his shit slipped and fell to tha rug
^^^Good personal...6/10
Thats funny.. I didn't know there was any thugs who lived in Belzabub
Related to Irish?
Cuz I ain't talking deaths of leprachauns.. when I say I killed his luck
^^^LOL..nice i liked this one...7/10
Needed a refill on talent..so he came to me..but rejected his Phil Me Up
^^^Nice creativity...7/10
Now I'm telling you
....ya haven't listened to shit..till ya heard what he's content with in life
He even volunteers to help out tha peasantry.. And B.I's still not nice
^^LOL...4/10
Couldn't come thick.. with punches that stick.. If He spit a cup of syrup
After all..what kinda of flow do you expect from a homo who lives in Europe
^^^ERRRrr,Got something against Europeans? Im European, but this was good, 5/10

33/60

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B.I.Detained's Verse...


Walking Through Bars?? Admitting Pre-Adolescent Punks into Drink Now?
that's gotta be the only for ya to Stroll in a Bar..& not get Knocked Out
^^^LMAO...this was nice, better opener then KT...6/10
tell me How!!..you can be Theoretical...& still be stuck in Fuked up Kaos
you got so many Victories..& you still fail to Produce a Respectable Loss
^^^Decent, could of been better...5/10
to a Counterpart of Quality..Fag is so Poor he's Rejected from the Street
^^^Played line, heard it many times before...3/10
you're ass could be fucking Dr.Dre..yet you still wouldnt be able to Beat
Kaos Battles Represent Sleep..20 hits of Valium couldn't give them Life
^^^Ehh not feelin it much, could of been better...3/10
see the only Sharpness you'll be Wielding is a Defenceless Butter Knife
^^^Decent...5/10
wot Are you Like?? from First View you a Fake-Faker uppin his Record
"For all the Herb Murders I commited"..*Kaos*..I Confess & Regret-Lord
^^^Good finisher...7/10

29/60

Pretty good battle but kaos takes it he just had a better overall verse...close one, good work by both.. No Hate just a vote...Props to both

Peace

[Kaos Theory]

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[Mr.W.Rong]

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[Kaos Theory]

Uppin in this bitch......#3


Boy I tell ya.......lol

[Kaos Theory]

Please Vote...
We need to finish this
So I'd appriciate a vote....Thanks