Aight then I'll spit first chekin....
Fo-Real
ViciousThoughts
Aight then I'll spit first chekin....
yo checkin hey go vote on me vs ja'e roc............................................... .................................................. ...........................
Vicious thought's rippin this cat and dislocating extremities, Think he'll win the battle, he's trippin more then a fat kid playin DDR indefinetly/1
This cat think's his rhymes are clean cut and defensively ready, But he couldn't clean up his whack act if he fucken studied hygenistry/2
Get the mod's over here this bitch was in an implication, I'm not talkin about biting or dick ryding but his rhyme's makin even black people incapable of procreation/3
Vicious Thought's spittin more complex hits then a dictionary of a chinese nation, While Fo-Real just spit's whack causing inflammation/4
Thought that the battle would be hot enough to be LLL my mistake I must correct, Cause when Fo Real spit's he'll have recked it/5
0-0 Noob's path to his first win was intercepted, His Impulse is worse then this fag Decrepit/6 (http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105729)
So While my part of the battle was intensive, I leave you now read the whackness, the other elective/7
Fin
Wtf uppin its your turn nigga
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^you were obviously gone for too long....stretched lines really hurt you nowadays.....and multis/vocab/rhyme scheme dont win battles......punches do......elevate.........nice werk tho.....your structure just needs some fixin.........you should take this easy!
Bump this shit up and I guess I was gone long hahaha.....
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sorry dawg i was doin shit i'll spit now>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
aIGHT hurr it is
Oh! i get it it know you just THOUGHT you was VICIOUS/
just like da rest of theese rappers a bunch a bitches/
leavin ya with stitches dawg you aint touchin my extremitites/
cuz i'ma one man entity, that'll fire shells till da whole clips empty/
you soundin like albert einstien dropped acid and thought he could flow/
but he woke up realized he was BACK and found out that he blow/
alright bitch heres some infomation, this inflamation that i'm supposobly spitten/ sendin you to another dimention/ lyrically sendin ya to detention, my rhymes aint just made up they a fuckin invention/
shits copyrighted to so dont try to steal it/
playah hatah you gonna know dat i am da REALEST!
Check this and vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=FoReal
UPPIINN YOOOOO>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...........>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>............>>>> >>>>>
Vicious took this one because the extent of his vocabulary, and the originality of his punches. They weren't really hard but sorta original. The structure that he used though wasn't all that great.
Fo Real ya rhyme was ok, but it lacked in a lot of areas. your punches were played and ur vocab was minimal at best. Sorry dog. Keep elevatin though.
Vote Vicious Thoughts
OPEN BATTLE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105535
flow: V
punch: V
meta: V
personal: V
Structure: Blah
Enjoy: V
Vote: V
V change your style
lol went outa fashion
still merked though
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=106225
hit that up witha vote
Yo, this battle was pretty good. Here is the break down:
Vicious Thoughts:
Vicious thought's rippin this cat and dislocating extremities, Think he'll win the battle, he's trippin more then a fat kid playin DDR indefinetly
LOL... DDR....fat kids....LOL....trippin....i can picture it....lol 5/5
This cat think's his rhymes are clean cut and defensively ready, But he couldn't clean up his whack act if he fucken studied hygenistry
Weak punch, could have been better 2/5
Get the mod's over here this bitch was in an implication, I'm not talkin about biting or dick ryding but his rhyme's makin even black people incapable of procreation
Dont agree with the racism here, but other than that, a good punch 3/5
Vicious Thought's spittin more complex hits then a dictionary of a chinese nation, While Fo-Real just spit's whack causing inflammation
Good punch 4/5
Thought that the battle would be hot enough to be LLL my mistake I must correct, Cause when Fo Real spit's he'll have recked it
Flow a little messed up Reword it 3/5
0-0 Noob's path to his first win was intercepted, His Impulse is worse then this fag Decrepit
Nice general punch nothing special 3/5
So While my part of the battle was intensive, I leave you now read the whackness, the other elective
Again, messed flow. But nice ender, so 4/5
Overall: 24/35 = 68%
My Opinion: This couldve been a lot better. Come on. Make the flow easier to determine and use words that rhyme better.
Fo-Real:
Oh! i get it it know you just THOUGHT you was VICIOUS
just like da rest of theese rappers a bunch a bitches
Played out Rhymes. 2/5
leavin ya with stitches dawg you aint touchin my extremitites
cuz i'ma one man entity, that'll fire shells till da whole clips empty
These rhyme? 1/5
you soundin like albert einstien dropped acid and thought he could flow
but he woke up realized he was BACK and found out that he blow
Good rhyme. Funny. 5/5
alright bitch heres some infomation, this inflamation that i'm supposobly spitten/ sendin you to another dimention/ lyrically sendin ya to detention, my rhymes aint just made up they a fuckin invention/
Killer multi. This is what i expect from battles. at least 1 good multi 5/5
shits copyrighted to so dont try to steal it
playah hatah you gonna know dat i am da REALEST!
Weak ender. Filler 2/5
Overall: 15/25 = 60%
My opinion: This also could have been better. This guy uses to much filler and the words dont go together the way they should.
So. Vote goes to:
Vicious Thoughts
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Contrary to what you may think:
You are NOT a good rapper.
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Uppin this shit
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this battle is an easy one
vt/ not to bad was missin alot in the personal and punch department but made up for it with flow multis and vocab structure needs work
fr/ ya shit need ta be better there was nuthin there at all elevate then battle some more keep ya head up tho
vote:vt
hit this up wit an honest vote to repay the favor thnx alot
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106438
Uppin for the kill
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