BombZ vs. Jockyourself

[BombZ]

10 Line Max
No feedin'
No Pre-postin
20 mins to spit
Blind Spit

[jockyourself]

no nigga you read da rules yo spit 1st, no blind spit shit or no battle!!!!.........
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[BombZ]

First time visit to front line, your goal for today is 'must rhyme',
20 minutes I should adjust da' time, cuz yo place aint here with BombZ,
But at home with momz layin' on her lap, your praying, Im spraying gats,
He think he's 'fitted' to win, but I'm flipping ya' hat,
Go ahead and spit punch-lines, but harder I'm hitting ya' back
Sicking ya behalfs, cuz I don't see you on da' map,
'Shitting' on this cat, which explains why his rhymes is all 'crap',
We above and combin down, so pussy fall back!
If I 'jocked' you instead, tell me what would you call that?

[jockyourself]

if u wan meeta start, jus say it an ill tear u up................................................ .............................................
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[BombZ]

Start niggah! you were suppose to start a whuile ago, hurry up, you got till mid-night cuz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[jockyourself]

i hear you... but listen up closely, im an emcee,
you empty no lightly but, nicely- take my advice please
harden and ur too slow, pik a beat an flow, im ur new mentor,
take all the ryhmes u got an find a thrash dispnecer, use a crap artist,
iv jus begun uv gon ur farthest... mann, this is rap nigga, an ur frontin
american bandstand, damn man, uv crossed dangerous territory,
native land , and...so wathc ur bak, my crew hasgottan eye on u,
but ur no threat, dubble or nuthin, its ur bet, "careful- stand bak explosives on jet"
btu wait im not thru jus yet, top mark " theasaures" , yous a DIKtionary, this is mor complex than ur average pictionary,dont bite my shit, jus do ur does,
remeber my name, oh , an screw the rules... im an and 1 starter, uv already made it,
ppl say u did a bomb sho and afterwards replayed it, jus say it,
i no ur past present and future, its time u gave up loser, ima one hitta spitta,
are u fo real nigga, or a no good sorry quitta, uhp, ur finished, dont lash bak,
or ill end up pullin the trigga...

[jockyourself]

uppin 4 votes......................................
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[FreeThinker]

Bombz god this
Better wordplay... And hes punches acctualy connected. Plus hes structure was better.

Jock i really wasnt feeling your verse. No real hittin punches in there. Keep elevating man

vote Bombz


plz return a honest fevour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106914

[jockyourself]

i respect that, but if bombx is fo real- y is he lashin out on firs timers, cmon now

[BombZ]

yo, dont make that an excuse, being new to a website forum has nothing to do with your talent, if you sucked, then why did you registar? Okay, stop bitchin',

Uppin for votes!

[Chris Black]

v/bombs

Bombs wasn't spactacular but he has a couple nice punches...
All Jock had were some decent multis at the begining...

Sorry fellas but I can't poll vote...

-W1

[Mad Mike]

bOMBZ gOT THIS SHIT , COMPARABLE SHIT BUT BOMBZ HAD A LIL BIT BETTER FLOW

[Mad Mike]

pLEASE DO ME THE FAVOR OF VOTING ON ANY ONE OF MY BATTLES

[t-west]

/v - Bombz

Why? Much better verse overall, better punches, better wordplay, better in basically every aspect

Why opponent lost? Lacked the strength that Bombz verse had, whack punches, terrible wordplay

Personal comments: Bombz came much harder, jock...trip to wackness emergency center is required. No hate. Just tellin it how it is.

Noticable lines...
But at home with momz layin' on her lap, your praying, Im spraying gats,
He think he's 'fitted' to win, but I'm flipping ya' hat,

could of been worded better but still good

[BombZ]

good votes, uppin' for some more though, lets get this going............................................