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5 votes win 3-0 k0
no d/r please
only explained votes count
u the vet n u had me set dis ish up so u fire 1st unless u scurrrd lol if so we can fire em up blind......
check in .........
5 bars 10 lines
5 votes win 3-0 k0
no d/r please
only explained votes count
u the vet n u had me set dis ish up so u fire 1st unless u scurrrd lol if so we can fire em up blind......
check in .........
I'll drop something on you in a couple of minutes...
Good luck, D.
Peace afterwards.
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Him...
Crew: none
Biography: hip hop junkie
Location: sac
Interests: music
Occupation: sales/music
D-reed's about ta get waisted, cuz he lives right below...
When he claims his location's 'sac' he don't mean 'ramento'.
He's talkin bout nuts, how he loves when they crack...
And since he's a bitch, they get cracked all over his back.
Hip Hop Junky? Hip Hop wishes ya'd find another vice...
It's tired of being used, and tired of you asking for advice.
I'll take this bitch's pride, all he's got till there's no excuse...
Since I'm cleaning out a pussy, consider my rhyme a douche.
Dreamed of facin me & got a lesson, his subconcious wasn't fooled...
So today D didn't bother going ta class, cuz he woke up schooled.
ohhh shit nice fuckin drop man that was tight way to keep it real dog...we don't fight, we just MERK!
yo this dude's 34 years old- how the fuk u got a record of 90-84 battlin 12 year olds=-
ur vocabs weak n rhymes reek of mold- bitch betta retreat cuz mines eat through skulls=-
born to kill -lol - u for real ? i got horns of steal- that peal leavin yea face down in open fields- with black tracks from the possi traction..swealin as i spinnin des wheels=-
u betta forfeit cuz u was born to neal- now peal back this forskin n eat a meal=-
vets like u get snacked on- left in toliets like tampons- kids like me laugh on- @ 34 year old sons- still livin @ home with moms=-
time to move on which ur imaginary- cant fuk wit rhymes that are legondary- ur wurd plays been burried- bring ur fukin rhyme book to DREW CARRY=-
tell em that ish is out dated- ur whole fukin image is gold plated-ur whole fuckin spit sound like somethin u regurgitated-u need to elevate kid- n u did- when i pop'd ur top n left yea decapitated=-
Uppin for votes...
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sex punches = homosexual!!!!!!
seriously iv seen those all day, now i understand why peeps at Rb hate em so much...
played: both had fillers and played punches
by born to kill had more.....
flow & multis: d reed took this fa me...
Personals: d reed took this easily...
punches: Born to kill edged this one...
word play: none
vote: d reed.....
plaese return the favor and vote on this battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...64#post1088364
Uppin for votes...
And please check tha personals and wordplay...
Osiruz obviously didn't scope those too clearly.
Peace
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iight...
Born to Kill... your verse flowed like a river... very good as it always does... and structure is tight aswell... a know the punches about sex and so on are a played idea... but it had me laughin... gooood punches... personals where scattered here and there aswell... tight verse...
D-reeD... your verse didnt flow very well... hard to follow... some 'rhymes' where very iffy... had some good punches... few personals... but it werent up to the standard of Born To Kill...
not a merk... not a close battle... somewhere inbetween...
vote - Born To Kill
keep up... Born To Kill... soon your gona be hittin 100 wins man... congrats in advance... good luck with that...
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BTK
D-reed's about ta get waisted, cuz he lives right below...
When he claims his location's 'sac' he don't mean 'ramento'.
Ha...good opener, nice punch
He's talkin bout nuts, how he loves when they crack...
And since he's a bitch, they get cracked all over his back.
Decent Punch
Hip Hop Junky? Hip Hop wishes ya'd find another vice...
It's tired of being used, and tired of you asking for advice.
Another Decent Punch
I'll take this bitch's pride, all he's got till there's no excuse...
Since I'm cleaning out a pussy, consider my rhyme a douche.
Ha...nice punch
Dreamed of facin me & got a lesson, his subconcious wasn't fooled...
So today D didn't bother going ta class, cuz he woke up schooled.
Good Closer With A Nice Punch
D
yo this dude's 34 years old- how the fuk u got a record of 90-84 battlin 12 year olds=-
ur vocabs weak n rhymes reek of mold- bitch betta retreat cuz mines eat through skulls=-
Nah...hes been here a long time, thats how many wins he has and im sure that there are some dope 12 year olds some where...wack opener
born to kill -lol - u for real ? i got horns of steal- that peal leavin yea face down in open fields- with black tracks from the possi traction..swealin as i spinnin des wheels=-
Really...kid...lay off the mulits...they mean shit...work on ya punches
u betta forfeit cuz u was born to neal- now peal back this forskin n eat a meal=-
little bit of word play...
vets like u get snacked on- left in toliets like tampons- kids like me laugh on- @ 34 year old sons- still livin @ home with moms=-
Hes married with a kid...lol...another fake wack personal
time to move on which ur imaginary- cant fuk wit rhymes that are legondary- ur wurd plays been burried- bring ur fukin rhyme book to DREW CARRY=-
Blah...not feelin it one bit..sorry kiddo
tell em that ish is out dated- ur whole fukin image is gold plated-ur whole fuckin spit sound like somethin u regurgitated
You didnt hear it...its text, how u know what it sounded like?
-u need to elevate kid- n u did- when i pop'd ur top n left yea decapitated=-
Blah blah blah...
Overall - BTK By A Mile
[BD work on ya struct and punches..lay of the multis[/B]
This is how ya struct should look like...
Line One Line One Line One Line One
Line Two Line Two Line Two Line Two
Line Three Line Three Line Three Line
Line Four Line Four Line Four Line Four
Line Five Line Five Line Five Line Five
Line Six Line Six Line Six Line Six Line
And So On...
Drop The == and all the --- stuff
lol .... i thought i posted no DYCK RYDING VOTES .....oh my gawd i thought he was gonna purpose n ish...... lol
w/e mayne 1-1 uppin
Seen better from B2K but his personals kilt it.....punches hit strong
Evenly structured.... and nice flow....
D...ya punches was lacking son.....and thats tha most important part of battle
so.
v/B2K
hit this up..... Its getting slept on....thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106391
oh my u gotta be kidding me are these ppl in ur direct family or wut bro ??
open up the fan base .........
uk the rules ....... all dyck ryders wellcome ......... 2-1 born to kill still uppin
^^^
stfu... before i decide to merk you...
B2K got this....quit swaying... makes you look like a dumb ass
... not to mention a poor loser
Uppin...
Do ya thing...
I'll follow tha link and all.
Thanks for participating.
Be peaceful.
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