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DiViNe MaNiFeStAtIoNs
Ehe the champion..
Ill drop Thurs wont b here Fri.
Feeb well agree to line limit over AIM.
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
Hi Largo . .
checking in.
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Avalon vs. Fgee
Evolve vs. Trapt
M~M vs. Taktik vs. 13th
Last edited by Richard Parker; January 17th, 2004 at 11:26 AM
ok feeble.
..check!!
your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating
U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning
remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him
who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him
defeat him again?..-
.I'll meet him first when he steps in the door
drive his head through it and put a new look on board
we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress
but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status
they named me the baddest, to kill without trying
I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM.
on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet
have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget
watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake
christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake.
I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me
I also can dull,
...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !.
..G luck home-E
*edited some typos*
Last edited by bribeone; January 15th, 2004 at 08:33 PM
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ...
cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know
Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial ..
cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial
Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag
only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd
M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you
cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do ..
your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g
he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three ..
u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts
but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out ..
that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews
cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww ..
Nice Battle Here.. Bribe Had Nice Wordplay And A Few Good Personals..But Feeble Pretty Much Killed This Battle In Punches And He Equaled Up In Personals....He Also Had A Better Structure...
Qoutables:
Funny And Nice Personal..Good Job, LoLOriginally Posted by K.Largo
we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress
but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status
Nice Personal And Good Humor..Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag
only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd
Witty And Funny, LoLOriginally Posted by Feeble Minded
when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ...
cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know
Feeble Also Had A Few Other Better Lines, The VB3 Line Was Good And His Closer Was Ok...
Personals - Tie
Punches - Feeble
Structure - Feeble
Vocab - Feeble (Some Parts Of Bribe's Didnt Rhyme...budget/plummet)
Wordplay - Bribe
Opener - Feeble (Bribe's Was Played)
Closer - Tie (Neither Were Too Bad)
Vote - Feeble, Just Better Overall Verse And Harder Punches
fuck...
I was tryin to stay SOoooooooooooooooooo far away from this battle... K asked me to vote... Feebs asked... fuckfuckityfuckfuck..!
Ok... breakdowns... line for line...
Bribed'allofus...
your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating
U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning
I got it... yes I did... nice play... no hard hitting... naw mean..? in a 30 line this would've been better... 4
remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him
who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him
probably your best couplet... damn good... 7
defeat him again?..-
.I'll meet him first when he steps in the door
drive his head through it and put a new look on board
I saw where you were going with this... or where I would go with it... good shit... 5
we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress
but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status
no... I saw it... still don't like it... 2...
they named me the baddest, to kill without trying
I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM.
*shrugs shoulders* I kinda get it... not hard hitting... 3...
on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet
have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget
if you'd have said Bush or the budget i'd got a 8... 7 nice line...
watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake
christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake.
lol... fruit cake lines never go out... 8
I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me
I also can dull,
...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !.
if you didn't see candle you're a fucking idiot... good... not for a closer... the bush line would've been the closer... 5...
total:40 out of... 80... F+
Feeb'sassisheldshutbyAislecinco...
when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ...
cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know
wow... off rip... 8...
Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial ..
cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial
if you get it... it's funny... if you don't it's meaningless... 4...
Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag
only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd
nope..! 1...
M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you
cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do ..
take out just would've flowed better.. other than that filler... 2...
your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g
he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three ..
lol... I don't like the set up... but... lmao... 5...
u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts
but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out ..
fuckin stupid... if he paves the road... it's already flat... *shakes head* you're better than this... 4...
that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews
cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww ..
if you'd have left out Expression With Words: it'd be alot better... 6...
total: 30 out of 70... F...
vote: K. Largo... damn good battle here... n' soon Feeb's you'll be able to beat me...lol... You too bribe... bitches I aint playin..!
Tag'D
Legend: Merk Squad
Vote - Feeble
I feel his verse juss came better as a full package than Bribe's verse did ... Bribe's verse had it's moments ... BUt Feeb's verse was more complete wit punches ... wordplay and such ... Was a good battle to read ... But Feebs took this in my opinion ... Peace
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I Agree With Mentill On This... I Thought Feeb's Verse Was More Consistant & Complete... Bribe's Shined At Certain Points.. But Feeb's Was Good All The Way Through... In Which Case
Vote Feebs
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
Bribe
your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating
U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning
4/10....weak
remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him
who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him
9/10....haha, dope
defeat him again?..-
.I'll meet him first when he steps in the door
drive his head through it and put a new look on board
5/10....weak
we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress
but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status
4/10....wack
they named me the baddest, to kill without trying
I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM.
6/10....good wordplay
on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet
have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget
6/10....good
watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake
christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake.
6/10....funny, but played
I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me
I also can dull,
...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !.
4/10....weak closer
44/80=55%
Feeble
when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ...
cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know
7/10....nice
Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial ..
cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial
4/10....nahh
Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag
only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd
7/10....nice punch
M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you
cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do ..
3/10....nope
your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g
he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three ..
5/10....weak
u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts
but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out ..
5/10...decent
that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews
cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww ..
5/10....not hard hitting
36/70=51%
You are both my boys, and this was a close one
although I've seen much better from both
overall, I think bribe takes it with better punches a more consistant verse
Vote - Bribe
Merk Squad...The Roster you weren't on
Diamond Minds...The Roster you're not on
LLL HW Champion...Been dope since forever
V. Feeble.
Both had ok verses, and both came a bit played. But Feeble hit harder with his punches, and was overall more consistent than Bribe.
Fav line of Bribes:
remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him
who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him
Good verses from both, but Feebs edges it out.
your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g
he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three ..
Fav line of Feebs^:
Last edited by Aisle Phive; January 16th, 2004 at 06:09 PM
Bribe got this i thought .. just all around better lines from his verse .. better concepts, more original lines i felt.
Lol.have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget
Feeble didnt really have anything i enjoyed .. the play off his sig was weak and the Vb3 line was worded horribly. = / Wasnt a bad battle, but Bribe got it IMO.
4 - 3 me. Thanks for the good feedback guys - i will use it & its appreciated.
Bribe's Verse
your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating
U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning
Eh, okay.
remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him
who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him
Lol, old concept, but very nicely worded to give it a fresh spin.
defeat him again?..-
.I'll meet him first when he steps in the door
drive his head through it and put a new look on board
heh, again old concept, but with a fresh spin put on it. Not as nice as the son/beat him though.
we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress
but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status
Yuck mouth
they named me the baddest, to kill without trying
I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM.
M'kay
on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet
have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget
lmao, nice
watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake
christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake.
Nope, there was no fresh spin this time
I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me
I also can dull,
...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !.
Didn't help your verse
Feeb's Verse
when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ...
cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know
Lol, nice
Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial ..
cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial
Lol, tryin way too hard here
Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag
only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd
Much better
M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you
cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do ..
Naught Feel-N Thaat
your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g
he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three ..
Yeah, no shit...hate the new board. Not a bad punch, but poorly worded
u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts
but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out ..
Me likes
that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews
cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww ..
BLeh, Nahhh
OVERALL: Very close battle. Both had some really good punches...and both had some bleh punches. I'm gonna have to say Feeb's edges it. Bribe, you might have taken it if it weren't for all the played concepts. You had a fair overabundance of them. ANyway, not a bad battle guys. Enjoyed reading for the most part.
Vote ~ Feebs
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By the way... I read this. Bribe took it
Winning 5-4
Bribe - 6-3
Feebs 5-5
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