LM vs TheUnderRated

[LM]

10-20 lines
No dr
No hate
No feeding
I'll spit first

All votes must be explained.

Check in and I'll start keyin somethin up

[TheUnderRated]

i got more than 20 lines to say to you......but if thats all your giving checkin........................................... ................................................

[LM]

You said I should be scared, why, bitch you can hardly rap...
And your not UnderRated dawg, we know that your wack...
So c'mon attack me, give me all you've got and still get murked...
You suck bitch, you lost 13times, I guess the polls never worked...
I heard you lurked in the darkness ready to rape a little girl...
But only when your Pc broke so you decided to see the outside world...
The whole of rb hurled when you got your 1st ever victory...
You could check my profile for a week and still not start dissin me...
And we dont even take you seriously enough recognise your skill...
Your probably just a net-pervert, who's older than born to kill...
You'll never be ill until you get prescripted and diagnosed...
Even then we'll think of you as one of rb's most loathed...
You could come raps on the stove and still not bring the heat...
So your fucked bitch, you'll never be considered as an elite...
This is almost complete, soon you can bring your rage...
But you stupid fuck said MC when asked for your age... (profile)
So on this page I wanna set the mutherfuckin record straight...
You outta your depth here, you wack chump, sealed your fate...
And I hate to have to read all your played stan jokes + lines...
But I'll deal with it coz you cant think of any new rhymes...

[TheUnderRated]

tell you what i'll leave stan out of this.............


fucka record bro yours was built off niggas like echo thats a no show...
kinda like your talent, thats a low blow your vote kind like my bars no hold...
because it held no truth like eminem would rip bis in a showdown...
i'll leave you in your hometown after i steal the so called crown...
u had my respect till you dropped that bullshit vote up in FL...
did she win cause she fed off my lines or because her skill was no where near mine??
The sad thing is i already beat you and you don't even know it..
if you wanna play vet son its ok your beastiallity just show it..
come out of the closet i'll leave you Lyrically Mangled that'd suit ya..
and if you like de-feet so much up in the polls is where i'll boot ya..
never been known as anything but a netcee then you disrepect me..
you want your whole dickrydin posse to back you so we battled where the vets be...
you think i'm playin a game yet u can't contest me thats what vex me..
your avy page look pretty blank suits how you script your text B..
The fact that your a vet holds no weight cause i don't envy ny..
1406 posts hmmm whose addicted to this site....lets see...
this must be the only place you can get respect yet how little you get...
your whole friendship circle cause be erased by a computer virus threat...
no light at the end of the tunnel 20 punches right to your muzzle looks dim..
i'm done with this beef we can meet sometime in a real tussel but for now L em.....

[High Class]

LM - You had some really nice punches in there. Some were weak, but most brought a nice effect. I liked the BTK line. You could have used more personals maybe, but thats no biggie. It had a good flow, alright wordplay, and over all pretty good. Just bring more personals if you can. Nice drop.

UnderRated - Your verse was over all very weak. There was just about 1 punch in there that really brought some effect. Your structure just fucked everything up. It made your flow very sloppy, and you need to work on vocab. I expected more, just work on the punches, structure, and the effect of your lines...

With out a dought...

VOTE - LM

[TheUnderRated]

ok thanx for the opinion......................................you obviously don't rap ............have a good one............................................... ............

[High Class]

Then you can just fuckin battle me and find out...
Pm me if you think you can beat me in a battle. Pink Slip Match...
So lets see if you can match your word...

[TheUnderRated]

grab a mic and we'll talk son peace out....

quoted from high class...
^ LM's my boy............................................... .................................................. ............

[CarsonJetX2]

I m kinda dissapointed here......
LM u dropped ok but the flo was off a lil bit.....ur punches were OK tho.....Under...I've seen alot better....overall a very very poor drop for u.......

LM gets this on harder punches.....both drop better than this

[TheUnderRated]

kool thanx for the feedback.......................................... .................................................. ...uppin...

[LM]

Uppin for votes (1)

[Born To Kill]

Pretty close this was actually...

In fact, I'd have probably have given it to Underrated...

Cept his format and rhyme scheme were really fucked in a couple of places.

That, and LM held his own real nicely with some tight wordplay and personals.

Underrated went for and got the multi's, no doubt.

Punches were surprisingly pretty even.

This was wordplay, personals, and flow...

And that's LM.

(don't think I didn't see that line bout me though!

[Its Illytizzle!™]

Close.. v.close.. now i see Underrated had a nicee flow complimented by those multis.. easy to read an i dont really think his structure let him down.. he jus seemed to change his pace a lil.. although he didnt have as many personals his were harder hittin an put to better use than LM's..

LM was a bit too vague compared to usual.. felt a bit too much filler in there detracted from some real clever hard punches.. flow wasnt as on point either tho it made for a slightly more raw approach..

Overall i felt Underrated this close azz battle with more finesse in his flow an personals..

VoTe = Underrated

An madd props to both.. great battle to read..

Peep these plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106773

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106772

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[Its Illytizzle!™]

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[FreeThinker]

LM got this. He had harder personals and better sturcture. I got into his shit and it was hell funny and easy to go along with,

Underated i just didnt get into your verse... I have see better from you man. Vote- LM