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    It's All Real

    first is me.. then formula.
    beat-its all real (pitch black)

    it's all real, all hail
    the storm of a man that soothes,
    thunders through hell
    ravin`, shakin`, makin` satan
    shake in his boots,
    the running new dude
    the ripping new jack,
    the nice always in the cut sage
    that never knew that,
    when he got paged from the front office
    the song off-his album made the front page
    of that new mag..
    but he's not bad
    although its tough in rap for someone to be new
    and be news to someone else
    that shares the same views..
    the freak, beat rockin
    by the unique rap prophet,
    so you - can hip hop off it,
    and i.. can make some hip hop
    and make.. a profit off it
    Eyes On The Prize. . Like Requiem For A Dream
    Die From Lies. . Spleen Slipped Via Bullet Smothered In Vaseline
    Harass Ya Needs, Ya Central Nervous System Stutterin'
    Park-A, You Below Me In Park-B N Butterin'
    It's Nuttin' Son, I'll Bust My Gun Quicker Than A Rising Sun
    Since I'm The Livest One, You're Dying By The Tongue
    Fucking Frantic Facists Frontin' In Newspapers
    Ducking Damage Damn Us Dipshits You Know We Movemakers
    Bootleggers Boggle Bravo Bastards Killing This Industry
    Cater Caidence Corrupted Cavemen Didn't Have Technology
    Rappers Rippin Rockin Racked Yo. . They Fucking Dying
    Shameless Shadefest Seemingly Nothing, No Something Trying
    Denying That Me N Kredit Dope, Suggest You Switch Ya Smoke
    Before I Flip N Choke You Like Spree Handlin His Coach
    D Double T, Raps Medallion. . Keeping Shit Afloat

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    Up For Feedback. . Kredit says his shit normal on the beat. . I spit mine rather fast. . it flows. . trust this.

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    Yo...this was a nice drop....Formula's verse was better tho...Aye Bee, ya jus' neet to work on word choice and bar length....oh, and rhyme scheme...you rhyme you spit 2 or 3 lines and then ryhme again...not a bad scheme, but you have to try soemthin else to make it work...no hate....Formula had a nice structure...nice rhymes too. Good drop...

    7/10

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    lmfao, newbies
    Fuck You, I Don't Lick Cock

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    True ^ ^

    Structure is dope for you Aye. . And flows well, I just have the longer bars, shit still flows.

    -brushes my and aye's shoulders off-

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