10 lines
Blind spit
30 min after check in to spit
No hate or DR
TheUnderRated
Telekinetic
10 lines
Blind spit
30 min after check in to spit
No hate or DR
kool good luck man i wish you all the best checkin and keyin for a minute pz...one.......................................... .................................................. ..................
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kinetic energy is the energy of an object in motion yet your frozen..
left frosted by the coldest lines that were ever written or spoken...
your a flyweight applying to a known authority for a licence to ill ....
got stuck right in the face by striaght ace and even tried to take on born 2 kill...
i'm bout 2 cock back and deck her this female MC right in her grill..
add in the L on this kid and its just like i'm running another drill...
i'm like a tanker truck crash into to me and i explode leavin you in debree..
on different level on the MIC so telekinetically is the only way to reach me...
My brain overpowers your telekinetic powers which will leave a slight mishap...
why you hittin your self son oh shit cause i'm leavin you telekinetically bitchslapped....
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i usually don't explain but i don't think people will get this one so..
back and deck her.....then add the L....and it like i'm running another drill......black and decker........one
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I see you're in IJL, I guess you're the head dick of the faction
You actin all great but you break down more than a fraction
This Insane Joker has got more dick riders than a sexual offender
Im a title defender but your just a 10 an 13 middleweight contender
You not a winner, you got more losses than the US over in Vietnam
You claimin to be a lyricist but you been dropped more than bombs
This guys not right like the sight of Marylyn Manson with preachers
And he's gettin slept on more than all the Orlando Magic bleachers
Who's your teachers they need taught no way you from MC town
You need to change the Joker crew to The Overrated MC Clowns
*his crew is Insane Joker Lyricist
*last line- claims to be from MC town
*line 4- he is 10 an 13 an middleweight
*line 8- Magic lost like 18 in a row
*last line- ripped on his name and crew
kool nice drop lets up it for votes............................................. .................................................. ..................................
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Thanks you to man............................................... ................
Lets Get Some Votes............................................. ...............
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Vote People............................................ ................................
Drop a link i'll vote on your shit when I get time....................
Dont sleep on this shit guys.............................................. ...
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ok first off the orlando line wus whack cauz even tho they lose alot (becauz tmac has to do all the work) people still fill the stands...
anyway Underated had better punches, metas, flow in my opinion...
didnt see multis form either not much...
flow n structure got to go to telekinetic but that wont win a battle
My VOte-TheUnderRated....
return the favor with honest votes here...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&pagenumber=1
ThanX....
Pz....
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
i meant to say that telekinetic only got structure cauz it wus easier to read she/he didnt get the flow my bad.......
consider this an uppin for both...
Pz.....
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
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This battle was pretty weak....Underrated... came with a bunch of fillers and your punches were bland as hell, you were usin telekinetic all over your verse with no real wordplay or disses....
Telekinetic didn't do anything nice either....all your punches were played, Yes even the Orlando majic's line......the only thing you had about your verse was your closer....it was the strongest punch of the whole battle, bring more of those and u'd win easy as fuck no doubt........
vote Telekinetic
return the fav if u may...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105817
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