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Thread: You Are!

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    You Are!

    Ya Citizens of ya self, and not society so be content
    Try’na change ya way of living, jus wasn’t fucking meant
    To reinvent is one thing but it rings without a tone
    To implement in theory but in reality, it doesn’t hit home
    I don’t condone re-creation its manipulation gone wrong
    Cos you are who you are, and your from where your from
    If people don’t like it, ‘fuck em’ we’re individuals, every one
    Nuthin wrong with ‘difference’ its keeps our gene pool strong
    With different personalities, doesn’t mean you’ve been conned
    Why respond by conforming, cos that’s the one thing ive learned
    It’s like a reflection in the mirror, yes, it’s always returned
    It’s one of the few things in life that’ll blister if it’s burnt
    Can reshape but it’ll hurt, would reject n wouldn’t even flirt
    Can’t revert to what your not, should settle for what you are
    Be apart from the crowd stand proud, no doubt you’ll go far
    Cos like I said….. YOU ARE WHAT YOU ARE!
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    nice...as usual..Uppin on this...

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    upp..... gotta read,,, one of the best ive done in a while.... going onto audio too.... as the first verse of a track....
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    nice flow,,,,, better structure than normal,,, the odd nice multi, good vocab and you came at the subject well...... your stuff always sounds grimey and philosophical like the wu tangs earlier stuff, keep it up.......

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    another ill drop..

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    good vocab...
    multis on point with low...
    kept togehter well...
    thought out...
    wish it had been longer...
    congrats...

    plz check this o.m out
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    uppin this shit...pZ
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    yo man tight shit, good content was feelin this piece, can't see any flaws everything was down, flow, structure, vocab, multi's and your rhyme scheme was hot keep droppin. peace.
    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>Atmosphere - inspirations of following in the footsteps of story tellin rhymes</table></center>

    <center>Corrupted Visions</center>

    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>

    Act One:

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    Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
    gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
    so what’s this heartache all of a sudden edge’in to your seat/
    fuck it, cement shoes and 200 feet oughta be pretty sweet/</table>


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    color="blue"><table style=filter:GLOW(color=white)>it's perplexity set in a realism of our world/
    it's textual content, stepping stones on broken pearls/
    if wisdom is a need be vent for visualizing truth/
    then let be proof, demise the break between adults and youth/</table>

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    thnx man.......
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    upp this shit.........pZ
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    Good vocab here.
    Flow was pretty good.
    Not much wordplay, but the message came across pretty well.
    Emotion was blah, but I didn't get that this was suppossed to bring anyone to tears, so it's cool.
    All in all, 6.5/10

    Nothing dramatic, nothing bad either.

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