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Thread: "ALL MAN" my first drop on this site SHOW LOVE!

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    "ALL MAN" my first drop on this site SHOW LOVE!


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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    tell the mucka he did a good job with the beat, original stuff. you had good delivery vocally and a sense of rhythm, good topic, a slight lack of multis, good hook, nice imagery.

    good work man.

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    well this is going on my commercial album...i got multis and punchlines for days LITERALLY...but they're not neccessary in this case...

    thanx for listen
    pz.

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    Quality wise its great.. production tight.. whole tight drop... one of the best on this site..

    Show some love...
    stop sleeping

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    Straie
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    real nice..........good rappin voice and flow............beat was perfect for this track....lyrics was hard hittin....hook was off the chain...production great...........overall rawness

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    yea... not too much to say, nice shit... flow was good, this not really my style tho, hook was cool.. riding the beat well, u can tell it a detroit style i wouldn't-a guessed but u said it... and it clued me in... lol... str8 shit dawg... hit up my track,,,,1
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    no doubt ya'll
    rhyme scheme wasnt complicated because i was rushed like all to hell...but thanks for peepin this one

    this is prolly my fav...next to another track i'ma drop later on...

    pz.

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    yayayya im likein the beat so far...beat is dope...hooK?? nice!!...
    u sound familar...dope voice...yeh word on the not so complicated rhyme scheme...but its doesnt detract from the track...kinda...leaves u wantin more you know...sorta guess its me...word at this being straight shit....not a new topic...but yeh...u did really well...quality is great...good drop...
    i liked it...~1~
    even if u were crucified you couldn't hang

    this is the rewrite

    THE MANIFESTO

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    Abysmal (SoE)
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    hmm .. sounds really main stream
    production is flawless, haha u 21?
    my only problem is u sound like alot of other emcee's but ur shit is ill dont get me wrong ..

    lol our group is called "Stratageez Tactics"
    good drop

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    yeah alotta ppl say i sound like so and so...but i have too many styles...this is just one of them...

    no doubt ya'll thanks for peepin...pz

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    I like the beat-love that hook.MC is tight!!!
    shit is blazin njaa meen?

    peach mang
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    thats whats up...thanks for peepin...

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    White Owl Bundy
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    Urban man what ups...It's Bundy...I'm just givin you props on this one man...I check you out over at SC...I'm waitin on an album brother...Send me a copy when you finished so I could study it and steal your rhymes...I mean you know...Listen and stuff...You know...

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    Swoop
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    shits mashin

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    no doubt bundy i checked u WAAAAAY back...i always thought u had skills dawg...u one of the few that make beats AND rap such as myself...thanks to all ya'll for peepin...ya'll makin me feel more and more at home...PZ.

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