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Thread: Complications: [feat] Formula

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    Complications: [feat] Formula

    [Formula]
    People Can't Respect My Space, Re-Check My Rates
    Invest In Weight, But Wait, I Got Six Fucks In My Face
    Formula Needs To Do This, That, Maybe This Here
    Album Tryna Drop, But It Won't Get To Breath This Year
    N I Want Get To Leave With Cheer, But I'm Frustrated Constantly
    Mistaken Bodily, I'm Now A Bag Of Bones Cause Clones Jockin Me
    Stoppin Me, Is My Beeper Buzzin Or My Cell Ringin', Unlucky
    Deal With Trees Was On The Hush See, But Chatter Don't Make Um Trust Me
    Somethin' Is Always Poppin' Up, Barely Have I Gotten Up
    Without The Horn Of A Truck Blarin', Starin' Down, I'm Fuckin' Up
    They Glarin' Now, Complainin' Bout Me Gainin' Absolutely Nothin'
    How Can I Be Gettin Somethin' With These Bums Rushin' N Fussin' ?
    Nothin' Is Gettin' Done, Son, I'm Tellin' You, These Complications
    Have Me Conversatin' Instead Of Workin' Daily, Basically I'm Taken
    I've Been Anxiously Awaitin', For These Situations To Loosen Grip
    Bruisin' Trips, I'm Movin' Lips About Shit Instead Doin' Spits

    [Dev]
    Ya plan ya life, but get nowhere with good planning
    Ya got it set, then sumthin fucked is bound to happen
    But stay laughing, chin up, look towards the light
    There’s always a bright side, a cliché but normally right
    Cos ya might lose the war, but at least ya engaged to fight
    I mean, no one wins them all, cos some hurdles gain in height
    Complications arise unannounced and fuck up ya night
    It might be becoming ill, a flat tire, or a long delayed flight
    Like when ya gotta be somewhere, jus creating more complications
    Unneeded dilemma’s spawned from freak invasions
    Just like uninvited relatives at ya family occasions
    Putting a damper on matters, with the shit that they’re raising
    Jading people’s plans, every day plays a new situation
    Ya never know when it’ll happen, but there’s no use waiting...
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    good collaboration, both of you stuck to the topic, which was original. formula brought strong multis and dev strong vocab meaning a nice balance in styles as well. hope you make this an audio.

    good work.

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    Yeah i agree this was a nice collab here guys.....enjoyed the read.....Formula had alright structure...he had some nice multies, liked that....flow was good, had good vocab as well.....Dev had good structure....nice vocab like always...flow was nice ...overall a nice collab guys....keep at it.

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    Nice drop from both

    Pros: Both of you stayed on the topic real well. Sometimes when 2 or more ppl are collabin, the flow gets messed up going from one person to the other. But with this, it was as if it was written by one person. Real good flow from both. Pretty good wordplay from both, when it was used. I really enjoyed the "unexpected relatives" bar, nice similie.

    Cons- I wish you both would have used more worplay, would have made it deeper. Also, in open mics, try avoidin ending lines w/ the sufix "sion".

    Overall good piece, very much enjoyable to read. Respect and props to both, pz.
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    yea this was a Nice collab Guys...ya both came good With ya Flow And Formula ya came good to start it off man with ya flow and structure were nice shit man ya kept it Goin Hard the Deva Ya Flow was Nice man ya kept It On Point of the Topic and so was Ya Structure and y had Nice Multis....yea so this was Nice collab Keep it Dropin.....PeacE OuT YalL.....

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    Yeah nice collab....Both stuck to topic...Good wordplay...The flow was nice and constant you both had nice word play ...Good solid verse

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    thnx ppl... it was only a quick sumthin we threw together,,,, but thnx for the comments...pZ
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    uppin this shit... dont sleep.. sleeping is for girls.......lol...pZ
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    ..Good collab..and as aways 'Dev' with another hot piece...both verses were very well written..nice content..good structure..good scheme..what more can I say...good job fellas...

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    thnx......
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