fuk all here.
fuk all here.
Last edited by west; March 7th, 2005 at 10:05 PM
Uppin.
Peace
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Hmm..
Structure could have been a little better here..
Although you got out your point well..
Not really feeling the ghetto mainstream in it..
Overall it was an ok piece.. 6/10
No Hate
Props
kinda like that NIke commercial ( I AM )
lol,
anyways... nice... I liked how you brought this
concept into play... your structure was good...
your flow was real nice and you vocab was damn decent...
nice shit man, I enjoy reading your shit.
DayumNation
it was a good piece flow was ight vocab ok multis ight punch ight word play ok over all 5/10
It was a good piece but it kinda lost me in a couple lines, where it broke up. Other than that the flow and concept was good. You might want to try writing about something different next time, not feelin the hoe talk.. anyways keep it up man.
yo west nucca what da fucks up kid i came back to rb a lil while and i see u've elevated keep dat shit up mayne
n holla at me boi if u even remember me
..Fuck what you Thought..
this was a good peice, you had a good structure very well put across, your vocab was nicely done you had some good thoughts i liked this good piece
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Good, aggresive piece...
Kinda didn't like the goofy multi fest at the end...
But the rest was a good, prop your evil self up type of thing.
Better than the usual "I got's tha bling" type of shit.
A few played concepts (R. Kelly again, people?)...
But pretty good for what it was.
7/10
you seamed off maybe its cause you been ghost so fucking long which made me pist at you but this wasnt a bad read just not your normal standard of lyrics.
to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
Yea some mainstream type ish wrather than the Underground high vocab shit,jus tryin to show versatilty,Appreciated feed from all.
Peace
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