RhymeTyme vs. Dialect OTYP

[Dissonance]

yo, blind spit

minimum 10 lines
no max

no recycling, d/r or crew votes

When you vote, tell what lines are best, so i know what to work on.

[Dissonance]

Yo, I'm gonna freestyle-on-text, try to do-my-best,
the next thing you know, I'm callin-you-collect,
make sure your rhymes, get double-checked,
because I will make fun of your fuckin dialect,
whack Rhyme's Come Straight, Uncut, from This "Donkey's" Mouth
but Now It's My Tyme, I'll Send Your "Ass" South
Didnt you realize, you already lost the bout,
so I'll sit here and wait, for you to write your shout,
I'm gonna win, in my opinion, no doubt,
so when you walk away, don't let no one see you pout.
I usually write rhymes that are bigger than ten,
I'm a swami, when I look into your future, its grim,
and your chances of winning are at most, none to slim,
what you need to do, is go to the womens gym,
condition and come back, battle all the n00bies then,
For the ending ill say, im against all your side,
and now ill take somethin Other Than Your Pride (OTYP)

[Dialect OTYP]

this faggs been mean muggin me givin me a shitty look/
this queers idea of "rhymetyme" is readin a kiddy bool//

see boi my flow ull *break* ya brain down inta *sectors*/
you think you beatin me what you aint seen my record//

see this kids full of shit, in his clan they see who can hold the most/
you bout ta be added to the list right below my post//

behold the truth ya best line read "fuck me"/
this kid aint gangsta look where hes from, kentucky//

and I read ya profile ta get ta know who im'a merk-dis-time/
my verbal sign will severly hurt-kid-rhyme//

see kid my flow like sirea mist, got natural flavor/
you should close da polls now cuz we know who the gunna favor//

you might be good in the furture but then this ull be the past son/
hes only got 30 sum post and been on since last month//

and if you said you could beat me then i be hatin you lire/
you couldnt burn my rhymes if you wrote um down then set the paper on fire//

dawg you wouldnt drop hard lines if you wrote while you was gettin-a-dick/
you mus eat ass alot cuz all you spittin-is-shit//

[~King~cruncH~]

Dialect got dis one, his flows were better he had better punches, better wordplay..... good battle though............


could u plz hit up these ones

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104859
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104412

[Dissonance]

thats just a cut& paste from a previous battle.....thats just a stupid way to get your links in there....

[Wr!te Mind]

I bet there's gangsta's in Kentucky Dialect......well maybe not...but maybe yes too...lol

Dialect takes this battle easy, Rhyme Tyme you need to throw punches, the rhyme scheme wasn't bad, but you lacked everything else

Vote: D

Sorry I can't poll, I bet it's annoying all the heads I am voting for, but oh well....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104306

[Dialect OTYP]

haha even if that is what he did it doesnt matter cuz his vote dont count ne way so who cares how he pro-mo his shit tho i dont like newbs voting im just a dick like that

[FreeThinker]

Dialect got this for acctualy chucking pucnhes. thats what wins battles! The other cat came oright with flow... but wasnt really hurting his opponent. this is a BATTLE! anyways keep elevating

vote D
plz return a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104648

[Dissonance]

yo yo, i think im gonna lose, so i decided to *lengthen* my original...



Yo, I'm gonna freestyle-on-text, try to do-my-best,
the next thing you know, I'm callin-you-collect,
make sure your rhymes, get double-checked,
because I will make fun of your fuckin dialect,
whack Rhyme's Come Straight, Uncut, from This "Donkey's" Mouth
but Now It's My Tyme, I'll Send Your "Ass" South
Didnt you realize, you already lost the bout,
so I'll sit here and wait, for you to write your shout,
I'm gonna win, in my opinion, no doubt,
so when you walk away, don't let no one see you pout.
I usually write rhymes that are bigger than ten,
I'm a swami, when I look into your future, its grim,
and your chances of winning are at most, none to slim,
what you need to do, is go to the womens gym,
condition and come back, battle all the n00bies then,
For the ending ill say, im against all your side,
and now ill take somethin Other Than Your Pride (OTYP)

Im about to come back for you,
for an an unrequested verse, that makes it number 2,
this guy uses gay words, when he's the fucking fool,
a fag outright, cant beat my plight,
when i release these words outright,
use my advice, go get outta my sight,
when i tell you to get off of ya knees, and i zip up my fly
you just got owned, on round 2 not round 1,
everyone knows that you just got sonned!
and for the record you should know kentucky's the best
all that smog up there, got you all failing this test
I'll battle the rest,when you want to battle me?
a suburban white kid, you just barked up the wrong tree
so go tell all your crew you got beat by a honkey
my bad, im sorry, i didnt know you was white,
thats ok, my rhymes are hotter than yours, when they ignite,
I'll give you a light, when I take flight, and electrocute you like a storm when you was flying a kite!
So, to end it again, I just went through a bottle o' gin, and to top it all off, you got all those votes from your friends.

[Dissonance]

i never saw a rule saying you couldnt *tack-on* another verse...lol...maybe a couple punches? it might get me a vote!!!

[Dissonance]

the 100 minumum is really bad...maybe they should lower it to say...50... i want to vote for people so bad...it takes so long to get 100 polls, and only the good rhymers got over 100, so only they can vote, and there just isnt enoguh of em to vote on everything... anyways...no one mentioned any specific lines that they like out of it all...or didnt like

[Dialect OTYP]

man you cant fuckin legnthen ya verse thats liek in a real battle takin a second try cuz you messed up ya first that add on dont count and stop postin stupid shit dats called free postin you get banneed for dat and post takin away if you wanna build post do cyphers (duh)

all voters dont count the rest of his vote

[Dissonance]

lol....like it matters, my style is so weak, it didnt even matter, other than for people to laugh at me some more. and btw, whats cypher?

[Dialect OTYP]

uppin for votes
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uppin for votes
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[~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~]

Where the fuck is yo punches ryme time lol
Dialect threw better punches
flow was Dialects also
vocab - dialect
strucutre - dialect
closer - dialect
opener- tie
OVER ALL VOTE - dIALECT

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