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*No 1 line votes
Good Luck
lil' tagger
Verstyle
10-20 lines
*You know the rules
*All votes must be explained
*No 1 line votes
Good Luck
who spits first???????????????????????????????????**
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Checking in... go ahead and spit.i will drop shortly after you
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Peace
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dawg, ur rap dun compare wit mah rapz nice-ness
i blow ur shyt up, rip it, chew it, n leave u life-less
he tellz me to spit first, and yet he's thirteen n' "o"
he prerittin hiz shyt rite now, - workin on hiz flow
U may think dat u got da potential to fight....
afta u hear mah verse...dis ni99a drop at first sight
In dis battle, your ass gonna get merked
your shitz prewritten, but yet unrehearsed
Yo i juss had a thing called "day-jah voo"
i had a dream bout dis...n i waz killin' you
your rapz sink like water goin down a gutter
dis dis shook, he heard mah name n he stutterr
your stylez sad...bringz mah eyez a tear of laughter
afta dis u gonna go around carryin a "1"
n wen pple ask u how many loses u got, u cant say none
for you..dis battle aint gonna end happily-ever-after
yo u must b tired.......call in for a substitution
yo u need 2 elevate,make it ur new yearz resolution
no hate.....*~1~*...good luck
n in line 14.... da him carryin da "1" meanz dat he gonna have one loss.........lol.....good luck yo
correction...line 4....."prewrittin"........
n day-jah-voo iz wen u think it happened b4....juss 2 let yall noe
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o wait......no it not.....itz prewring,......mah fault*******
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oooo fuk......yo i fuqed up dat verse........yo lemme do it again...
same thing ....but change da linez around............
dawg, ur rap dun compare wit mah rapz nice-ness
i blow ur shyt up, rip it, chew it, n leave u life-less
he tellz me to spit first, and yet he's thirteen n' "o"
he prerittin hiz shyt rite now, - workin on hiz flow
U may think dat u got da potential to fight....
afta u hear mah verse...dis ni99a drop at first sight
In dis battle, your ass gonna get merked
your shitz prewritten, but yet unrehearsed
Yo i juss had a thing called "day-jah voo"
i had a dream bout dis...n i waz killin' you
your rapz sink like water goin down a gutter
dis dis shook, he heard mah name n he stutterr
your stylez sad...bringz mah eyez a tear of laughter
for you..dis battle aint gonna end happily-ever-after
afta dis u gonna go around carryin a "1"
n wen pple ask u how many loses u got, u cant say none
yo u must b tired.......call in for a substitution
yo u need 2 elevate,make it ur new yearz resolution
no hate.....*~1~*...good luck
n in line 14.... da him carryin da "1" meanz dat he gonna have one loss.........lol.....good luck yo
ite spit***********************
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Blah Blah..No need to go hard on him
Enjoy
lil' tagger is resting on bricks he shitting out thinking the hells finished
He’ll be cutting edge, only when I grab shards of his self image
Skill is poor, when it comes to punches, you whoring too
So cheap, I had to slash the prices of what I got in store for you
Tired of your spunk, never felt pro-pain you're just gassed from your luck
And since motivation's a must, I'm a strike this match to fire you up
You sacrificing your punch for structure itself, your best work ain't felt
So I dont need to try much when you already posted a lower case L
Prepare to fail...everyone catches bad breaks & your bones I'm rippin em
And everyone has the right to make mistakes, thing is you're living one
ite dawg.......uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
heres the breakdown.....no hate Honestly ok...and its not a D/R vote cuz he has mad wins....here u go...
Flow=both....
structure=verstle...i liked his more cuz it was shorter.
Complex=verstyle^same....
punches.....LOL with a small structure he had all punches towards him.....Including personals are him to...NIce multi
overall-verstyhle...
aight battle but u got merked....lol
Hit my battles up plz....No hate votes plz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104513
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103792
cant vote cuz im in paraGone wit verstyle...but good battle
lil tagger...work on the complexity of your shit...seems real elementary and shit..
Verstyle nice verse,....came whitty and experienced, ur mad elevating......the closer was really ill as well.
i would vote V but i cant!
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
upping #1................
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