BombZ vs. Eki

[BombZ]

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No D/R, nigga...
Due before mid-night cuz
Release when ready

[top-quala T]

bombz aint shit,, and notthin but a pussy nigga,,,, im dah bigga nigga,,,i got 10 says u aint eva touched a pussy,,,, bet its cause u like it in the tooshi

[top-quala T]

yoo dawg dis steven wuz crackin,,,, what have you been up to holla back cuz............................................... ..................

[FreeThinker]

check in..... ill spit soon man............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

[BombZ]

Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer,
Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air,
You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break,
Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age',
U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit,
Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits,
Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments,
For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense,
You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent,

[top-quala T]

willy its st8ballin696,,,................................... .............................................

[FreeThinker]

Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes
I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with with swords
I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong
he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong
Insane Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine
............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn.....................
Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom,
............dates back to your childhood..............
ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room
your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass,
your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy)

[168]

my vote down
Bombz



Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer,
Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air,
You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break,
Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age',
U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit,
Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits,
Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments,
For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense,
You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent,

good wordplay good vocab and strieght pounchs
overall a very good verse but you could have came on harder
-----no hate jus a vote---

Eki

Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes
I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with with swords
I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong
he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong
Insane Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine
............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn.....................
Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom,
............dates back to your childhood..............
ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room
your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass,
your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy)

better overall verse with better and stronger pounches and personals really got me laughing
better wordplay


overall vote ---------Eki----------

no hate jus an honest vote

vote my battle in sig

tight battle you had

peace

[168]

aight boyz i can't poll it won't let me

get that fixed

peace

sorry for this freepost but had to tell yeah

i hope i reached a hundred fuckin characters

[FreeThinker]

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[Q.S]

BombZ

Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer,
Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air,
LMAO... nice meta.. kinda extended
You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break,
Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age',
LMAOOOOO nice last line
U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit,
Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits,
Humerous.. what what this is 2 funny
Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments,
For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense,
You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent,
ohhh thats cold... ha ha nice closer


Eki

Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes
I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with with swords
..... ohh nice last line
I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong
he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong
wak.... sowwy
Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine
............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn.....................
Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom,
............dates back to your childhood..............
woah whats up with the dotting.. damn
ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room
your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass,
your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy)
good closer....

Eki u had to explain.. ur structure wasnt too good.. and some stuff was wack.. but my vote goes to Bombz.. he came a bit harder...

[Blend]

ok
bobmz had much better flow and humor in his lines. eki had the personals but it wasnt enough to overcome the punches from bombz. bombz wins my vote wiht the funny lines and good flow

[Blend]

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[rule]

BombZ

Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer,
Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air,
^^lol...good opener very witty...well done

You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break,
Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age'
^^LOL...that was fuckin dope i have never heard that very creative

U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit,
Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits,
^^midgets is played but you did use the line concept well

Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments,
For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense,
You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent,
^^Good line...i liked that...well done finisher


Eki

Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes
I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with swords
^^Alright line didn't sound to creative...flowed good...

I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong
he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong
^^not bad...didnt hit hard though
Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine
............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn.....................
Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom,
............dates back to your childhood..............
^^meh another okie punch

ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room
your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass,
your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy)
^^good finisher...but thats about it

Overall Bombs came harder vote B

Yo it wont lemme poll vote ask a mod to fix that...sorry guys

[FreeThinker]

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