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10-16 LiNEz
DeadliNe tommarow MidNigHt..
SigN In..
~RaPiDfIrE~
J-durable
Rules:
10-16 LiNEz
DeadliNe tommarow MidNigHt..
SigN In..
checkin........................................... ..................................................
I.J.L.
woaaah buddy ur deadline is tonight..not mine..I made it specifically clear that I would have my verse up within 24 hours after yours...I will probably drop mine tonight anyway but I'm not getting a noshow for not doing it tonight if something comes up...
peace
I.J.L.
I noticed you guys had enough to vote... and as you can see I don't... but I was hoping you would be able to drop an honest vote on my PINKSLIP BATTLE with Tox aka Game aka Noda Ropes.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...89#post1052489
Thanks.
Oh and also. I will hit up this battle with an honest one once I get enough posts. But until then... I can't poll vote.
checkin in,im fint to flow first .................................................. .................................................. .....
O Damn im forgeting,feelin deja vu//
o yeah,its tyme for you to lose,yo 1-2 debut//
Nigga got late fees cuz his rhymes is way overdue//
after this battle no one will be speaking of you//
Cuz know one talks about the defeated,yo ass is depleted//
while im a hero in the mind,yo ass is gettin deleted//
aint tryin to break yo heart but yo rhymes is wack,mines is better//
yo rhymes mo' ugly than dem old bill cosby sweaters//
I feel like this is a circus and ~rapidfire~ is a clown//
my lyrics is like ragein' water and yo ass is bout to be drowned//
you cant step to me,i blow dat ass up leave you in debris//
probably got his rhymes from a site called "lyrics 4 free"//
ive hardly begun,knocked out like a homerun//
yo ass has been outdone,you beat me it cant be done//
you got checked,im more complex,you da lizard im da tyrannosaurus rex //
you sit down tryin to spit yo lame rhymes effects,while im done wit you wonderin who's ass is next//
i knoe i gave you tyme but can you spit soon?............................................. .................................................. ......................
lmao...ok ok ok
ayo
You might be a 'dick', but you don't got balls//
ya skills so rusty, when you 'bite' you give 'lockjaw'//
J ur not Durable, cuz ya get broke like glass//
this bitch is an 'herb', guess I'll just smoke that ass//
you can't win kid, everyone knows that I'll murder ya//
ur the worst thing in cali, since Arnold was governor//
look at all the homo's that "got ya back"//
like u don't got a condom u just forgot to (w)rap//
I come full speed n neva let up throttle//
ur throat can squirt red stuff like a ketchup bottle//
look...you could be better, u STILL won't beat me//
I doubt anybody would even STEAL ya cd's//
I forgot your just an herb, so I slit ya neck//
cuz ya like gum in a book, u'll always stick to text//
even if you was a dj, you couldn't "turn the tables"//
replace 'dur' with 'un'..u should be J UNable....
that's all you get....
vote...
I.J.L.
i give this vote to Rapidfire.. i just enojoyed reading his verse more and his punches landed harder and more on point...J you didnt have a bad verse.. just that i wasnt really feeling it..No Hate
Just a vote
Overall: Rapidfire
Can both of you please return the favor and vote on my battle honestly..I took the time you should too.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104281
Thank You. Much Appriciated
Peace
upin for votes............................................. .................................................. ........................
rapidfire had more of a complex verse.....the punches were way better and had some wit and cleverness to them unlike durable....
i liked
I forgot your just an herb, so I slit ya neck//
cuz ya like gum in a book, u'll always stick to text//
even if you was a dj, you couldn't "turn the tables"//
replace 'dur' with 'un'..u should be J UNable....
3rd line down of that is played a bit tho
still
v/Rapid
can u vote on this plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104467
^ lol I like ur name...thanx for the vote...........................
2-0 me....................................
I'll hit ya battle up................................................ ....
peace
I.J.L.
uppin this for Rapid...this counts against him......his first upping....................
peace
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