unlimited lines,
you drop first,
i wont be able to drop till later,
good luck
*Home~growN*
Poseidon
unlimited lines,
you drop first,
i wont be able to drop till later,
good luck
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Originally Posted by SpL!T
welcome to da end of it all/ now ur on ur knees ready to crawl/
ur rhymes r dull they have no point at all/ u dissapoint me i thought u had style/
ill beat u jus like a bad child/
ur like a dozen mild, ill eat ya up/
jus like Fat Albert eatin a reese cup/
wuts up with me, wuts up with u/
think he can spit, when he cant even chew/
if i want any shit from u, ill jus scrape my shoe/
when i drop dis bomb, u wont know who hit chu...
Blah, just a quick keystyle
Ill kill this kid with ease,win the battle w.out trying,
Cus hes going no where fast,like when penguins try flying,
Like boxers in the wrong weight division,he cant compete,
Playing hot potato is the only time he throws heat,
I would throw some personals in,but kid your not known,
Couldnt be twice the man i am,if you created a clone,
This kids been here as long as me,still dont no where to post,
Droppin verses in bitchslapped,cus he can relate to it the most,
Can we get some votes in now plz
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Originally Posted by SpL!T
uppin
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Originally Posted by SpL!T
i gotta go wit hg hes shit flowed better and had more humor needs a little work on structure but good
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kid are you serious????? lmao
uppin for some real voters................
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Originally Posted by SpL!T
Originally posted by Poseidon
kid are you serious????? lmao
uppin for some real voters................
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Originally Posted by SpL!T
Home Grown had one line that made me chuckle, a very slight chuckle, but that's it. Nothing else special.
Poseidon's verse was just flat out better. Keep elevating both, you two are probably the two best I've seen in Front Lines, everybody else here is so fucking whack.
This kids been here as long as me,still dont no where to post,
Droppin verses in bitchslapped,cus he can relate to it the most,
(That bar was funny)
vote - poseidon
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
uppin.................................uppin....... .........................uppin.................... ...........
home grown- structure was horrible, punches didnt hit hard at all, humor was minimal, no personals, no multis, slight wordplay but wack
poseidion- strucuture was fine, some punches were ok, humor was ok, no multis, wordplay was ok
conclusion- poseidion came wit harder punches, humor and wordplay so my vote goes to him
VOTE- poseidion
yo if u wouldnt mind can u hit up my battle wit lil; tagger
peace.............
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come on peeps vote.................... uppin................uppin...................uppin .................
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vote...................uppin.....................u ppin.................
vote...................
up up uppin away................................... come on need votes...................................
Home Grown- spit/chew line was the only decent line of the battle, bad structure n' weak rhyming...keep ur head up and stick with it though...
Poseidon- Good bar structure, had points of complexity throughout the rhyme, had some meta'z going...wasn't the best work, but got the job done...
Conclusion- Poseidon had a better overall verse, better wordplay, punches, structuring, the whole deal...
Vote=Poseidon
uppin....................
come on we need some real votes.............................~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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