Detrimental vs. :)

[Street Fame]

10 lines
No dickriding, hate, or crew votes
No BITING (i see its common round here lol)
I hve to reply within 20 minutes of his verse
Lets do this...Waiting for you to drop

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[Under Dawg]

aiight here we go


yo this GEEKS LAME...and dude you got a fuckin WEAK NAME
i could rip your brains out and throw it on the "hollywood boardwalk" and you still wouldnt have "STREET FAME"

i got a UNIQUE GAME while you STAY FAKIN
your like raps version of CLAY AIKEN
the chances of you gettin signed is like that of eminem makin a deal with a GAY STATION

you've probably had a dick in EACH JAW
cuz all you do is reach in GEEKS DRAWS
your damn mouths like "pac man" cuz all it does is consume and EAT BALLS

@ im exposin you for what you are a snitch and a CRIME SQUEL
who'd suck of a whole label to get a RHYME DEAL
your mouths probably had more bombs go off in it than an iraqi MINE FIELD

i should have a NINE PEELED at you SNITCH FAGGOT
all you do is roll with BITCH MAGGOTS
your whole crews lips are like tight underwears cuz they stick to and KISS ASSES

[Street Fame]

This kid is wack as hell, people can smell the wackness within miles-of-the-place...
So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face!!..
I can see that ya trying to rhyme, and no better place to start than rhyming-online...
But you're like kids affraid of the dark, you'd probably cry for some-shine!..
I'm here to enlighten you, so smiley face, I just hope that you can maybe-see...
That having trees over the road is the only time you'll ever live in 'shady'-streets..
You've gotta advertise links in ya sig, because truth is no1 wants to read-ya-shit...
And the last time ya mom ate a roll, she lifted it up and seen-ya-dick!..
Like a girl that ran away from home, this faggot is nothin but a lost-bitch...
And working your day job as a lawnsman is the only time u'll 'drop-shit'..
You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good...
And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'..
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yep...it's over...

[Under Dawg]

1st up for votes............................................. .................................................. ................

[Street Fame]

using my first up................................................ ...............................................

[Under Dawg]

2nd up................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .....

[Street Fame]

got damn

2nd up................................................ .................................................. ..........

[Street Fame]

BLAH.............................................. .........

cmon can we get some votes in here or wat.........

[Under Dawg]

damn 3rd up................................................ .................................................. ........................

[BombZ]

Opener- Tie (Nice opener from both)
Structure- D
Flow-D
Creativity-
Punches-
Vocab-
Metas-D
Closer-"

Close battle, but overal Ima give it to He had way better punches... Good shit Detrimental, keep elevatin'

Return da fava
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[Mr. Mike Dew]

ok:

had some god ass punches like:@ im exposin you for what you are a snitch and a CRIME SQUEL
who'd suck of a whole label to get a RHYME DEAL
your mouths probably had more bombs go off in it than an iraqi MINE FIELD

and i was feel'n this line by D: This kid is wack as hell, people can smell the wackness within miles-of-the-place...
So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face! (this was my favorite line of the whole battle)

but when it came down to consistency and structure ........

vote:


check tha sig for links to my battles

[Under Dawg]

uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. .................... if niggas vote ill be sure to vote in your battles

[Born To Kill]

Sorry...

I think peeps is ridin the 100 + guy here...

Smiley had some good shit, no doubt...
Won't say he didn't.
But so much of that was played and not directed at anyone in particular...
Pre-written like a motherfucker.
After nearly 200 battles, even split on the wins and losses...
Trust, I can spot one.

Street Fame hit personally, (the "backspace" line was tight).
Hit with wordplay in almost every line...
And ripped the punches WITH PERSONALS!
Letting you know this was a freestyle!!!

Punches, originality, wordplay, and some nice flow...

Give the win to Street Fame.

Ya'll who voted the other way...

For shame!

[Casualty]

Structure- D
Flow-D
Creativity-smile
Punches-smile
Vocab-smile
Metas-D
Closer-"simliy

won with better stucture but it was not the greatest battle I have ever read

[BooChine]

okkkkayzzzzzzz



Dis battle was very Funny was feelin verse cuz of the structure and how his shyt was on point.....buttt


ReaSonz:



1.

I was Feeling this Line Right here:

i got a UNIQUE GAME while you STAY FAKIN
your like raps version of CLAY AIKEN
the chances of you gettin signed is like that of eminem makin a deal with a GAY STATION

^^^^ Dat was Funny....the whole Eminem thing....if u had worded it a lil Shorter it woulda Came out betta but it was good!


2. Dis Line right here....Just FuCked up errthing from My Point of view

[QUOTE]you've probably had a dick in EACH JAW
cuz all you do is reach in GEEKS DRAWS
your damn mouths like "pac man" cuz all it does is consume and EAT BALLS
/QUOTE]


I dUNNO......IT JUST DIDNT SUM UP 2 ME....


BUT I GIVE YA sHYT AN OVERALL 7/10



Now Street Fame


Ya Style is hella diff..so i had 2 look at ya shyt from a diff perspective..

the lines i found good in ya shyt was

1.

And the last time ya mom ate a roll, she lifted it up and seen-ya-dick!..
Like a girl that ran away from home, this faggot is nothin but a lost-bitch...

lol^^^^^ Dat Ish was funny....hehe


2.Another Line tha was str8 was:

So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face!!..

dat was funni^^^


But then i kinda got lost in ya shyt like 4 instance

[QUOTE][You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good...
And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'..
/QUOTE]

Scrating in the hood??? u lost me there.....i get the scratching....but where the hell does IN THE HOOD come from????

hmmmm Overall 8/10


well my vote goes 2

Vote: StreetFame