Tactical v. Squall

[Laureate]

10-?? lines
You drop first
House rules
G'Luck

[Squall]

prick~dont u get tired of suckin the same bithces ~dick~//1st
hes a ~trick~, only way he beats me is by his dickryding click//
I'll slash his ~wrist~,maybe ~commit~ a ~quick~lick~ from my~fist//2nd
had a fully loaded sniper, he wasted a ~clip~ and still ~missed//

Kid, start cleanin out yer closet and tell us the first man u kissed//3rd
lookah ~this~ he beats me by using a karate ~kick~ ?
I'm ~pissed~ I'll beat this ~chick~ till he no longer exists//4th
bitch, you spittin-n-hitten kids with prewritten ~shit~//

kid you can't ~hold me~ cause I'm spitting strong multis//5th
overflowing with power proving u can't control~ thee//
My flows are as noticeable as fat Joes waste-line//6th

leave u like 50cent and let you taste nine//I’ll spit 5 flaming barsI’ll spit 5 flaming bars at you that signify my “inferno scriptures”// 7th
I’ll leave you broken and torn like Leonardo Da Vinci pictures//
Its hard to notice his bars cause all he spits “is blanks”//8th
Find the bitch that wrote your lines and send him a “quick thanks”//

[Squall]

shit i copied this shit wrong one sec.........

prick~dont u get tired of suckin the same bithces ~dick~//1st
hes a ~trick~, only way he beats me is by his dickryding click//
I'll slash his ~wrist~,maybe ~commit~ a ~quick~lick~ from my~fist//2nd
had a fully loaded sniper, he wasted a ~clip~ and still ~missed//

Kid, start cleanin out yer closet and tell us the first man u kissed//3rd
lookah ~this~ he beats me by using a karate ~kick~ ?
I'm ~pissed~ I'll beat this ~chick~ till he no longer exists//4th
bitch, you spittin-n-hitten kids with prewritten ~shit~//

kid you can't ~hold me~ cause I'm spitting strong multis//5th
overflowing with power proving u can't control~ thee//
My flows are as noticeable as fat Joes waste-line//6th
leave u like 50cent and let you taste nine//
leave u like 50cent and let you taste nine//

I’ll spit 5 flaming bars at you that signify my “inferno scriptures”// 7th
I’ll leave you broken and torn like Leonardo Da Vinci pictures//
Its hard to notice his bars cause all he spits “is blanks”//8th
Find the bitch that wrote your lines and send him a “quick thanks”//



DOne, sorry about that

[Laureate]

Shit, I can tell you got problems but battlin me aint your solution
Elevate to positive numbers theres ya New Years Resolution
Dawg you call yourself Squall, man what kind a fuckin name is that?
Lets face it man, thats jus as hardcore as a fuckin pink skull cap.
Squalls jus anutha whack emcee reppin the ATL
You musta wished for a loss when ya "spit" in that well
you aint elevatin man, wouldn't respect ya if you was payin
Even if ya bought a caddi your skills wouldn't be "escalading"
Fuckin newbie I jus de-virginized you in the art of losing
Versatile, I'll merk you in any style of your choosing.
I jus fuckin killed ya ass, like piss you aint shit
Dun fuck with me............................dumb Bitch

[Squall]

in my last one, the fifty cent line was repeated, an error pay no mind to it .................................................. .................................................. .....

[Laureate]

uppin fo some votes please............................................ .................................................. ...............

[Laureate]

uppin number 2................................................. .................................................. ...................

[Mimesis.]

aight heres my breakdown..........

flow-not availible in text
structure-tie
vocab-squall
multis-squall
metas-tie
wordplay-tactical
punches-tactical
personals-tactical

overall-tactical

props to the both of ya, but ima say tactical takes this.........

yo since i spent my time and leavin feedback on ur battle id appreciate if u did the same.......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102686

peace........

[PaDDyMaN]

No doubt tactical took it
Opener------Tactical
Closer------have to say squall cause he actually thought it out, does that defeat the purpose of a flow?
Personals----Tactical
Punches----Tactical
Squall you just gotta keep elevatin nigga just hit HARDER and be more creative nigga try to get more personal dont be so general about who youre insulting get down to this niggaz flaws and reem his ass
VOTE TACTICAL

RETURN THE FAVOR NIGGAZ I DONE DID YOU ONE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101696

[Laureate]

uppin numba 3. Please hit this up................................................ .................................................. ...........

[EyE QuE...]

i think Tactical took this or should i say "TAG"...

Tac just had a better overall better verse punches landed harder and where more consistent...flow was pretty even personals also goes to Tac..Squall your verse wasnt all that bas but you still need to elevate before battling More Expeirenced MC's you took the finisher though ... No Hate Just a Vote

Overall-Tac

Peace

[EyE QuE...]

Can Both of you please vote honestly on my battle...
i took the time you should too..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102839

Thank You. Much Appriciated
Peace

[Squall]

sorry that vote didnt count, I think the vote was correct and all but u don't have 100+, i might be wrong or sumfin. but it says u have 75 posts and on the board information thingy it says u need 100+ posts to vote.

[Squall]

last post i was speaking to"yo-what-up"

aight fair votes, still uppin tho........................

[Laureate]

uippin number 4. PLease drop an honest one here guys .,................................................ .........................