12 lines
30 min
blind spit
no b/s
Bugz bunny
Aragorn
12 lines
30 min
blind spit
no b/s
(this is not my check in) you gonna check in or what ill brb to check in ill be like 5 mins yo dont spit unless u chekc in cauz the battle wont count....
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ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
Check in
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yo i aint runnin....................
Check yo Checkin' Inn.............
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ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
yo look at you stealin ya name from the Lord of the Rings...//*
this battle im merkin u so aragorn wont be returning the King//*
i rip you so fast they kall me freddy krueger, im winnin so that makes u a loser//
beating you so hard im the lyrical bruizer, your verse gonnabe so whack people sleep on this like snoozers//
my bars are stretched n structure whack, ill still bat u with 1 blow to your back//
send you right back to the place they call Sac, leave you bloody n broken in a bodybag//
reppin cali hangin wit movie starz, im reppin philly people would kill you n leave you scared//**
ya so whack u cant spit ill with a case of the SARZ, n look at me im still stretchin my barz//***
u stab at my heart but i dont get an attack, i squeeze on ya head n ya skull cracks//
i throw u onto the floor of an office stabbed by thumb tacks, your gonna lose FACE THE FACTS//
ur in a crew MAINSTREAM ya cant get witcha own, now dissn ya clothes look like mommy made em they HAND Sewn//****
if michael jackson kalled u, you still wont get sex on da phone, even if u had a windy job u still couldnt get BLOWN//
*Lord of the rings-Aragorn is a character in the movie n is the king in return of the king
**hes from sacramento, california
***sarz is a disease/plague in china
****mainstream is his crew
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
my bars are stretched n structure is whack, ill still beat u with 1 blow to your back//
had to fix it, it even confuesed me...
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
yo im waiting for oyu verse its been like 30 mins now n u still havent dropped u were supposed to a few mins ago but o well just try to huryr up....
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ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
I'll murder this kid...for real son I swear you'll get rushed.
Call you "kid" cause you got more hair on your butt than nuts..
Thirteen years old...I'm old enough to be the nigga...
You hear slapping headboards with your aunt and older sista..
I'd hit your moms too... but your pops is a hater...
I'll eat you uncooked like fon du'...with a side of potaters...*
Your more than a newb, tell you the truth...why even swallow you?
You still hitting the skating rink...rexing.. hoping they follow you.*
But your meat's so tender... Ya bones is kinda hollow too.
I can cut straight thru ya femur bone... with no effort dude!*
Hope you the last of your kind...your not filling..
I'll never slay a man again this fast..I'm not willing
Fon Du'= beef, barely cooked over an open flame.
Rexing= dancing on skates.
Femur=leg bone
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good battle.........bugz lines WAY TO STRECTCHED.......you lose becuz of that......structure good for A....punches were so so from bugs....good from A....he simply whipped yer asss......
vote Aragorn
Bugs Look Liked He Was Writin A Story I Didn't Like It It Was Aite BUt Structure Was WAck As Fuck Sentences Were Stretched and He Still Typed a Line About It
Aragorn He Came Nice And Smooth No Big Punches Or Vocab But His Flow Was Funnier And More Catchier
Vote=Ara
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102244 vote for this fuckin battle please 1
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aragorn took this. he simply had WAY better structure, punches were harder hitting, nice flow and some wordplay
bunny had horrible structure, ok punches and flow, bad wordplay.
punches
wordplay
flow
structure
go to aragorn
he won this
vote aragorn
everyone hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=killer
Man let's keep this shit cracking.
Drop a link and I'll hit it up.
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both of ya have sum hard hittin punches...but Aragorn...lol, u came out harder in this battle in my opinion...even tho u did have sum played out sex punches...they were styll pretty ill. Bugz...u had sum stretched liens which really screwed up ur flow and fukked up ur punches which is why Aragorn's hit harder.
Due to structure and punches...
vote- Aragorn
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yo aragorn first of all u forgot to poll vote my battle against lyricaljedi. lol no problem just go back and poll it please.
for this battle...yo bugs i thought ur shit was ok but the lines were too stretched and aragorns structure was aight. i think aragorn won this just for better wordplay and better vocab. he also edged bugz out in punches.
good battle
my vote- aragorn
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