me n u
ill spit first
yall kno the rules
first to 5 votes
must explain votes
Crooked-Comical
Petrafy
me n u
ill spit first
yall kno the rules
first to 5 votes
must explain votes
Yo u getting scared but here theres no escape like Alc-a-traz//
My lines r like knifes stabbin ur ass, killin-u-dead//
There was no chance of u winnin this shit but yet u-still-try//
This is like jumpin in front of a bus, cuz either way u-still-die//
I'll take a second to speak, n Ill keep my weapon in reach//
I ain't talkin romance but you'll get swept off your feet//
I got more riches than you, I fuck more bitches than you//
Only thing I haven’t got is more, stitches than you//
Put your ass in my path and I'm gonna blast it//
Give u just a sample of me n I burn u like battery acid//
This guys life is always in slow motion like the matrix-reloaded//
Now just sit there n stare nigga cuz u just got straight folded//
what this take me like 5 minutes hit it back yo man
You Got Whack Structure And Punches And Whack Weaponary/
Bitch I Am Like A "Deadly Dance Combo" Do Not "Step" To Me/
Im The Illest , So Sick That Medicine And Antibiotics Are Useless/
Your Fake,You Bite So Much Lyrics Your Going Fuckin Toothless/
Thinkin Your Gunna Get Votes Cause It Took You " 5 Minutes "/
Well All Your PRE-WRITTEN Shit Is Getting Fucking Diminished/
Dont Even Try To Battle Back , You Should Just Retreat Bitch/
Cause If Im On Your Fuckin BEEFLIST,Ill Make You MEETLESS/
Belive This , I Aint No MotherFuckin Joke, Your The Hoax/
I " See Through You " Like Your A MotherFuckin "Ghost"/
yo just wanted ta say i didnt pre-writ......................................
tight ass shit mann..................................uppin for votes
Yeah man its All Good I didtn mean It , it Was Part Of Battle
Lets Get Some Votes
Good Luck Man...This Was Sick Battle
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I ain't talkin romance but you'll get swept off your feet//
Bitten off Gangstarr-Mass Appeal or You wanna battle me
Aight just though I'd point that out. Otherwise nice battle boyz.Merry Christmas.
Laydown:
Opening:Tied need a little work but n2bad
Punches:CrookedComical
Personals:CrookedComical
Multis:Petrafy
Metaphors:Tied (none)
Enjoyability:CrookedComical
Structure:Tied both well defined
Flow:CrookedComical
Closing:Tied N2bad
Overall:
Vote:CrookedComical.
I always repay the favour. Nice job bois.
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for real shit mann...i never heard of gangster i guess thas dq if u want crook....mah bad yall i mad tha mistake didnt mean it but o well.............................................. .......up 2 u crook
Nah I Wont Have You dqed .. lets just get some honest votes
P.s
Havent upped this in a while cuz ive been banned cuz i shared an Ip block with sumone else who got banned
it sucked
but im back
Peace
ite close shit but c-c gets this for me with better punches nice opener man,
just get sme personals in there but nice spit,
p- work on your punches gota hit harder man ive seen so much better than you.
now put an honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...46#post1030046 plz..............................thx............pz
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Alright come on yall for reall we need votes
post ya link ill repay the favour
peace
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crooked criminal had a better structure and punches ayt?
petrafy had good punches and a good structure but cc verse was easier 2 read!!
vote - cc
Beat: Doc_Knock(5-0), Rapper_Bigga(5-2), McAines(5-3) Mr.Mike Dew(5-0), Rb's Father (3-0)
Lost: ScorpianDeathLoc(dq), Rapper_Bigga(dq), Joker(2-5) Freeman(0-5) Warren Piece(1-5), alais(dq), lucious_kilo(0-5)
Voice Of The Streets MuthaFuckas
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aight...well, this shit was pretty dope. both had some good punches, but i think that petrafy came stronger and crooked didnt come back strong enough (no hate crooked).
vote: petrafy
please repay the favor....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102139
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101943
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lmao at doc_knock trying 2 be damon dash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shit talker
Beat: Doc_Knock(5-0), Rapper_Bigga(5-2), McAines(5-3) Mr.Mike Dew(5-0), Rb's Father (3-0)
Lost: ScorpianDeathLoc(dq), Rapper_Bigga(dq), Joker(2-5) Freeman(0-5) Warren Piece(1-5), alais(dq), lucious_kilo(0-5)
Voice Of The Streets MuthaFuckas
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