TheUnderRated v. Criticize22

[TheUnderRated]

10 lines
you spit first
spit asap and I'll follow quick
check in when you see this

[Criticize22]

checkin in................................................ .................................................. ........

[TheUnderRated]

checkin in, awaitin your verse .................................................. ..............fhiykgyujtyjdtyjtyjjhstrhjstrh

[Criticize22]

Face it, you cant "FLOW" as well like a boat with a broken sail/
Flow so slow like a hopeless snail, I'd rather observe a blind man flow in brail/

No1 got a flow as disgruntle as mine and I'm " WATCHIN " and runnin the time/
Rip and Crunble ya spine,You spit like a horny mumblin mime who puts cum in his lines/

I'm a blind racist who spits devine traces in eyes of these wide faces/
But Amist all the Blind hatred in this mans mind face it, I dont need to spit in my language, I'll battle in sign language/

Your an Arrogant child and its aparent your style is as scary as wild/
But my bars will burry this child so lets so you go without air for awhile/

Seriously, I got talent to spew I just get my vocab from alphabet`soup//
While you search your pussy for rhymes maybe you'll salvage your dooche/

[Criticize22]

man damn

[TheUnderRated]

Bitch I seen ya battle with 1st to wreck dawg
That was some prewritten shit no personals at all
You from the Lone Star state and you aint it son
This cowboy batttlin me with spurs and a dart gun
Lookin at this kids bio it's like Christmas is back
Cause there's so much shit I can use in my atack
5 foot 10 self proclaimed wigger tryin ta flow on RB
13 year old bitch, no need to rep yourself befo puberty
Face it kid you flow like a crack(ed) pipe with a leak
Shits choppy, like your pre-adolescence body your weak

[Limitz]

damn. crit, u just got merked. u had some good punches, but TUR beat u in every way. sorry to say it but TUR had almost every category.

Vote - TUR

be sure to hit me in my battles: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...hreadid=100587 and http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...hreadid=101623

[Criticize22]

wtfe dude that puberity shits old idk what makes yall think i havent hit puberity when my dicks probably bigger than yalls neway

[Joker]

TU- nice flow,nice punches,nice personals,havre really no mess ups

Crit- work on flow,had stretched lines,no hard punches,no personals

Vote:TU

please drop an honest vote on 1 of the battles in my sig

-chuuch

[UPS]

alright drop by Criticize22, good drop by TheUnderRated. I'll give my evaluation right here.

Criticize22...your drop was good, except some of your punches didn't hit as hard as they could have and a few of your lines were stretched. Also, in the 3rd bar...I don't even think you dissed your opponent. Now this is what TUR took advantage of as he does in his opener
"Bitch I seen ya battle with 1st to wreck dawg
That was some prewritten shit no personals at all"

See what I mean, he saw your flaw and burned you on it. TUR wins this battle, much more personals and harder punches. He also did have a better structure.

Vote- TUR

Return the favour...both of you, by dropping honest votes on the battle in my signature and this one below.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101459

[TheUnderRated]

uppin this for more votes c mon people .....................vote vote vote vote vote.............................................. ................................................

[Criticize22]

Face it, you cant "FLOW" as well like a boat with a broken sail/
Flow so slow like a hopeless snail, I'd rather observe a blind man flow in brail

i thought that hit hard but ima newbie so i knew i wasnt gunna win

[Joker]

I already voted and my battles are taking a million years to get closed so can u please drop and honest vote on 1 of the battles in my sig

[PaDDyMaN]

fucken underrated.......see the shit I had to deal with in our battle? hes GOOD.. anyway Rated won he just had wayyy better punches, personals, ideas, creativity, and it was short and SWEET like a lil asian with big tits. anyway I want to battle under rated again in like a week or two OK PAL? 'Other guy' work on ur punches, but dont worry man its hard to beat a thug like this nigga right here

[Cannabarz]

vote - TUR

this battle was ill, well not that ill, it was goood...well, not that good...anyways, both came fairly weak..Underated had flow and structure, as on the oth' hand, other dude had some nice multies and wordplay..overall..peronals does win a verse, and TUR had a couple of his spreaded out throughout his verse, which got him this win.....