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Payce
madman-doubleSS
Here's the rules:
10-12 lines
No crew or hate OR dickrydin' votes.
Verse's due in an hour
5 votes to win
checkin in......so dis is a blind spit then, got ya. I'll be bak in an hour with my verse.
Good Luck and have fun.
Check this:
Yo my blazin' flow will leave this guy with a burnin' sensation/
You can't cheat ya self outta death cause this ain't Final Destination/
My punches will leave ya with bruises that'll hurt the rest of ya days/
Tryin' to sound hard but you easier to break open than a bag of Lays/
Ya lyrical ryhme structure can't support a heavy rhyme/
That's al ya lyrics are only a quarter of the wieght of mine/
It's okay if ya gay, cause the worlds an accepting place/
Nut if you tryin' to hit 10 year old boys, I'll spread blood all over ya face/
Your the one case that needs to commit suicide/
Trust the world s much better without ya, both the East and West side/
Payce, ya a weak little nigga that couldn't lift one of my bars/
Go back to given' blow jobs in the corner of midnight bars/
My PaYce is too fast...I have already gone past ya son,
cuz ya living way back in the past...ICQ Number 2001!
Faced ya for buyin, ad said..."cheap win! Only cost 10!
"One victory for little tryin"...Its December 26th again!
another Boxing day sale....cuz u require zero struggles,
I only have one verse...n styll beat both of ya doubles!
cant even post ill shit...even I can't inflict Cancer on u!
no need to say it...Its obvious why u aint in no crew!!
My lyrics are really flattenin...bakin n batterin dis bum,
and in doubles im stackin ya...just Call me Aunt Jemima!
Merking Complete.
uppin, lets get sum votes on dis shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................
2Originally posted by PaYce
uppin, lets get sum votes on dis shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................
Originally posted by PaYce
uppin, lets get sum votes on dis shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................
fuk ppl, vote already.
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Payce you got skill but its a lil weak i can tell your a newb
Doubless-you got my vote cuz you burned him wit flow, personals, and the multies... one thing lay off the "gay" punches
they're old and played out just a lil advice!
VOTE: MADMAN-DOUBLESS
votes ppl. Don't sleep on this please.Originally posted by PaYce
uppin, lets get sum votes on dis shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................
Originally posted by PaYce
uppin, lets get sum votes on dis shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................
my last uppin and styll no votes. holy fuk.
this battle was weak hardly any real punches...now both of you dont get mad at me and start talking shit im just telling you so you can elevate
Payce was more original with his verse and if worded better could have had some good punches...work on ure wording at you might have some potential
Madman you were wack...played punches...no wit...just really sorry overall
vote - Payce
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Close battle.... two different types of verse I guess...
Madman had some decent bars, flow was off at times, structure would be better in a short/sharp format. I've noticed it pays to be more witty whilst staying basic with the wording to make a real impact.... i.e the bag of Lays etc... a punch, but something personal could easily cane it.... these lines from Payce were tight -
another Boxing day sale....cuz u require zero struggles,
I only have one verse...n styll beat both of ya doubles!
cant even post ill shit...even I can't inflict Cancer on u!
no need to say it...Its obvious why u aint in no crew!!
Personal, witty and hard hittin....cane most of ya verse really...
Payce had some weaker lines, the ad for sale etc... wasn't feelin it too much, but the flow was there throughout helpin shit connect....
Basically for those two bars above....
Vote - Payce
Openers - Tie
closers - Tie (both sucked) sorry
punchers -payce
flow-payce
vocab-madman
ideas-tie
close shit guys not by much, not a hate vote, its a fucken close one
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe
patce got this his punches was harder and he had better flow and had better disses.mad man u force alot of punches work on flow also.
Voteayce
hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102394
Payce takes this, his punches hit harder and the flow was a lot better. Also the other guy wasn't very good at all, he was wack. Played as fuck..Anyhow, elevate, good battle.
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