ok 8 bars verses due tomarrow at midnight! or dq
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Pr3cise
ok 8 bars verses due tomarrow at midnight! or dq
Whatever spit your 20 lines im about to drop what ive got............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
This boys done… Like I sent him polaroids of my murder weapon the way ya Pict-ure poison/ The joys done… Kids fires small n played so I’ll calm-it like a toy sun(comet)//
I deploy puns…Im a-mazed by you beatin around the bush so let the hedge bend/
I edge friend… Emerge’s fallin off the shelf and still aint a Ledge-end//
You has been…you couldn’t bridge the gap crossin into prep stores/
My rep pours…EM’s relatively half the work to climb over like step chores//
I pep wars to these prep whores…N I’ll hog the spotlight like I speak swine/
With weak minds…Ya talents just dodging ur pages the way ur skill deek-lines//
What I speak shines…Cuz the truth can-surpass(cancer pass) ur lies like throwing tumours pal/ And so the rumours shall….Cuz I’ll leave You “X’ed out” “twice” for “20” like “roman numerals”//
Kids a loser now, cause I got done rapin this bitch….kid you’re fake like a wig/
And on Rb your not even Recognizable LIKE THE NAME IN YOUR SIG/!!!!!
Uppin for dunny ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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god damn spit kid dont pre write....................
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checking in and dont pat youself on that back homie lolOriginally posted by Pr3cise
god damn spit kid dont pre write....................
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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*ques up Triumph*
keying up now
Precise is confused...kid think himself is a fucking veteran
Kids dislexic proof he confused a number with a letter and
Yeah kid you spit sick shit...along with loggies and phlegm
Took one look at ya lyrics and drop dead...laughin at them
Truthfully I now i look down on myself with pure disgrace
Brains missplaced...thinking we come from the same place
Fucka n00b ima rape him without lube and son him badly
Sadly..."Do unto others" he failed but I'll repay him Gladly
If ya looks anything like your structure...got ya in my glove
That shits ug...something so horrible only a mother could love!!
I told you you're an herb...who speaks like "uppin for dunny"
Funny I didn't have to give you an L ... he just took from me
Dead weight...and you can't come back like "a meal your ate"
For heaven's sake you agitate all the plates........
........you must be the reason...God makes all the earthquakes
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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can do I even need to vote on this.. pr3cise.. your whack.. no skill.. obvious by your lack of talent.. go kill yourself..
emerge.. you took this, your lines were sick.. fave were:
If ya looks anything like your structure...got ya in my glove
That shits ug...something so horrible only a mother could love!!
^^ killed you
way to go emerge cleansing rb of newbies one herb at a time
FreeAgent
This boys done… Like I sent him polaroids of my murder weapon the way ya Pict-ure poison/
The joys done… Kids fires small n played so I’ll calm-it like a toy sun(comet)//
Creative, cept the opener was a whack filler...3/5
I deploy puns…Im a-mazed by you beatin around the bush so let the hedge bend/
I edge friend… Emerge’s fallin off the shelf and still aint a Ledge-end//
Good punch...cept the opener is a whack filler again...3/5
You has been…you couldn’t bridge the gap crossin into prep stores/
My rep pours…EM’s relatively half the work to climb over like step chores//
meh...its ok, your first two were better tho....2.5/5
I pep wars to these prep whores…N I’ll hog the spotlight like I speak swine/
With weak minds…Ya talents just dodging ur pages the way ur skill deek-lines//
ur losin heat...line is alrite...2.5/5
What I speak shines…Cuz the truth can-surpass(cancer pass) ur lies like throwing tumours pal/
And so the rumours shall….Cuz I’ll leave You “X’ed out” “twice” for “20” like “roman numerals”//
Could of been worded better...good lines tho....4/5
Kids a loser now, cause I got done rapin this bitch….kid you’re fake like a wig/
And on Rb your not even Recognizable LIKE THE NAME IN YOUR SIG/!!!!
Weak ass finisher, worst line you spit all battle....2/5
Overall: 17/30 57%
Precise is confused...kid think himself is a fucking veteran
Kids dislexic proof he confused a number with a letter and
Well...Pr3cise's was better...the veteran personal was good tho....2/5
Yeah kid you spit sick shit...along with loggies and phlegm
Took one look at ya lyrics and drop dead...laughin at them
see Pr3cise...dats a better structure, his punches hit harder...3.5/5
Truthfully I now i look down on myself with pure disgrace
Brains missplaced...thinking we come from the same place
funny lol. Emerge wil lwin this becuz his punches hit harder...4/5
Fucka n00b ima rape him without lube and son him badly
Sadly..."Do unto others" he failed but I'll repay him Gladly
lol. Making me laugh Emerge.........3.5/5
If ya looks anything like your structure...got ya in my glove
That shits ug...something so horrible only a mother could love!!
WHOA!!! haha, dat line is genius. Best line all battle....5/5
I told you you're an herb...who speaks like "uppin for dunny"
Funny I didn't have to give you an L ... he just took from me
good punch............4/5
Dead weight...and you can't come back like "a meal your ate"
For heaven's sake you agitate all the plates........
........you must be the reason...God makes all the earthquakes
The rest of your verse was better tho....didnt like this finisher too much....3/5
Overall: 25/35 71%
vote: Emerge
will poll once I hit 100 posts.
Hit me up with honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thank You.
just to clear shit up "a meal your ate" = ameliorate meaing to recover into better form...maybe that will clarify things for people
uppin 1 for votes...thanks for the vote Payce
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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ALL YOU BITCH MADE NIGGAS IS WHACK SCARED TO ATTACK ON A NEW ACT YOU HOES PROBABLY GET HIGH OFF CONTACT I'LL SNIPE YOU HOES LIKE WESLEY GOT SNIPED ON NEW JACK CITY YA'LL RAP SKILLS ARE SHITY
chaci
1st vote wack....noob hate....d/r
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flow:Emerge
punches:tie
multies:Precise
structure:Emerge
personals:Emerge
Emerge took it barely though why everyone hating on precise that was a pretty good drop you had some good multies but they aren't everything. Emerge got ya with personals when he said thinking we come from tha same place. Tight from both.
vote:Emerge
uppin #2
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flow:Emerge
punches:tie
multies:Precise
structure:Emerge
personals:Emerge
i kno i can't vote though i wanted to drop my side on tha battle...
Emerge Took it by a Long Shot
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