raz vs. elldawg

[Elldawg]

5 bars max...

spit in 25 minutes...

prepare to get killed kid

[Raz]

10lines
(since you so confident) You spit first
i set up
25minute time limit
no bullshit

You agreed so you spit then i get my time...have fun

[Elldawg]

this lames-faced wit a guage-aimed right to his frame-range, he mus be buyin beer wit a fake-age, he must of SLIPPED OFF DA BOOK if raz think me and him are on the SAME-PAGE//
this cats betta have his PLATES-TAMED, cuz when ell is in battle its like raz ATE-FLAMEZ, these cats couldnt be ill if i sprayed-SARS, you cant await-fame takin ya STRAIT-GAME to GAY-BARS//
you and a vet? you couldnt match-hits, or why do you even think that you have the skill to attack-this? Raz's verses get 'slept on' so much it isnt obvious better half of him is still on a 'mattress'//
you cant be fast-to-attack ell lash-and-smash fags-like-raz, punches? he really lookin at guys he diguized his gayness for the ass-in-his-av//

hahaha.... killed?

[Elldawg]

my bars are too long..oh well... you couldnt match it if you had luck at gofish kid


bwahahahahahahahahahahaha

[Raz]

Son settle down, this will be over in a second
see you spit your best, but in this contest, raz just wrecked it
37-5 on the net but rb you just 0-1 how can that prevail
thats like building a house, but not using one damn nail
whats the matter i'm serving this herb like he on a platter
i said 10lines and he instantly starts typing jibber jabber
you all dried up son, like delicacies for older people
you came with silly weed smoke while i'm carbon monoxide lethal
Elldawg is like a still frame, wackness for him remains the same
now whos put to shame, spittin fire to cremate the remains

Damn i had my verse ready and hit backspace on accident....

oh well this should do it.......

Votes

[Raz]

Uppin for votes________________
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[Elldawg]

damn......................


your weak

hahahahahahahahah

up for votes!............................................ ..........

[Inversry.]

^NOOB go back to RAPWORLDS WITH your other fucking noob friends who rap with stretched line and use - to flow like..

PLATES-TAMED

Vote=Raz
he came harder and just his verse wasnt all that but it was decent elldawg just had teribble structure and no flow whats so ever...
Tell your n00b rw friends not to come here they will alll be soone'd

[spokenoh]

ok tight battle......bah haha

Structure-Raz (Ell's was wack)
Personals-Raz
Metaphors-tie
Multies-Um, It woulda been a tie but Raz wrecked it on the last.
Punches-Raz
Vocab-neither
Enjoyment-Elldawg

Final Vote-Raz

[Elldawg]

smh...... you must not know what a multi is kid.... fuckin herbs




and RW woulr kill this site................................


nuff said herb..............

[Tactic]

lmao at this

fucking dick ryders who dont know how to vote out and they say someone is better by they post count

[Tactic]

you guys dont even now what a fucking punchline is saying Raz got more...........................................

[Raz]

Upping number 2 = 2-0

and yes my verse wasn't great....but foreal look at the competition...why waste good shit?lol

[Raz]

Originally posted by Raz
Upping number 2 = 2-0

and yes my verse wasn't great....but foreal look at the competition...why waste good shit?lol

Now its 3rd up

[Taktik]

v/raz

pretty shitty verse, but yet elldawg was awful...........

raz for more punches and a better verse