10-14 lines max.
blind spit..
no hate votes ect..
Lil Phresh
-Jacka-
10-14 lines max.
blind spit..
no hate votes ect..
checking in... im starting it as soon as this post is up. peace out playa. (fuckin 100 characters..)
Ya Groundz a Corrupted Army, u better Examine-ya-Base cuz’ I’ll Shake ya Stance like Landz-when-they-Quake/ -1
Phresh’ll Damage-ya-Face until ya make Camera’s-Break, you couldn’t Endure a Biter, ya Stamina’s-Fake/-2
Grenadez explode tha Caves to ya Air wayz, thiz Lames-so-Dazed/ -3
Bitch I don’t Play-those-Games, Ya Boxin wit’ Fire….. watch me K.O.this Place/-4
Ya Scriptz-Irrelevant to Fit my Characteristics to Spit-Intelligent/-5
Just Skip-tha-Jealousness, you couldn’t Pick a Bone with me if you were an Archeologist-Skeleton/-6
Jack is Practicin’-Nonsense, with an Axe-in-Gauntletz I’ll Fracture-ya-Socketz/-7
Slappin’-thiz-Novice, ya can’t See me, but u might Catch a Glimpse of Phresh if u Captured-my-Opticz/-8
Ya Paragraphs Show tha Lack-of-ya-Logic, but Back-to-my-Concept…You need to Hold ya Spits back around me like Retractable-Vomit!/-9
Detach ya Throat-from-ya-Spine, there’s no Hope-for-ya-Mind, ya Linez Useless like Gunz with Scopes-for-tha-Blind/-10
I’ve Noticed-tha-Signz, these Emcee’s with no Quotable-Linez keep gettin’ matched with tha Dopest-you’ll-Find!/-11
Meet ya Apparent-Demise, against Phresh ya Lost in Space, Seems ya Starin’-at-Sky’s/-12
No one here’s Scared-of-thiz-Guy, watch me Give It Too Jack like a Fire Fighter Charity-Drive!!/-13
Feel tha Pain-when-I-Hit-em, check tha Reign-of-tha-Kingdom, and Jacka is my Next Slain-Victim/-14
Listen, for you My Name’s-Forbidden, Chomped ya Head off…now Phresh’s tha Next suspect for tha Anti Campaign-for-Bittens/-15
Sorry its 15, had to add that last line in. copy if ya want. p'z
dont spit yet man, i didnt realize i had 2 battles open and thats the most u can have, so u can post ur freestyle when i re-open this battle. sorry again and please dont DQ me
r u serious...
im spittin..no matter wut..nice drop tho..
u cudda made more personals..seems like a prewrite battle peice..
but all good i cant prove it..so props i guess to ya mulites..thats all i felt atleast..
mic check....
YA style ive seen it..trust me kid u aint on my level..
ill let u in on a secret,
when my bars hit they suscribe knockouts cuz they made outta metal..2
call me the devil the way i master fire an spit it at my own will..
shit lil bitch u must be illiterate cuz ya names mispelled..4
Your the worst prospect ive seen, like ya text career this shits finished..
Ya verse lost its concept so ill slash ya name off the hit list..6
skillz ya lossed it.thats the only thing thats logic,an u tryna be me..
This kid is still wishin santa will leave him sum punches under the tree..8
leave ya in defeat cuz all ya verses seem to be the same..
But only time this phresh mc is wrappin nice is when X mas came..10
the differance remains that your pretty much weak an wak..
ill have this textee demolished before the weekend past..
an ill leave it at that..
wit 4 battles open u hopin u only loose one tonite..
i won this fite hands down either way this kids gunna be disqualified..
wuts wit the dashes inbetween ya mulites no need to force it..
cuz ya careers colapsin outa proportion usin ya old spits..
to battle me wrong mistake i smelt prewrite but it still wont hurt me..
Even if this Fresh off the block mc wore 42 he still cudnt be worthy..
its unearthly the way u claim the sreets of indy when your only 5 man..
damn kid so far not to good this shits over quicker then ya rb life span//
Hmmm.... Lil Phresh... did you battle at LL by any chance?
*I'll vote - don't take this as a freepost I'll come back*
wuts L L
a site or a league..
u wanna battle big L...
if not its coo..but im loookin for a few battles tonite..
just got outta the pen like 2 months ago....
but lil came clean..sum his lines ive seen in his other battles
worded different..obviously..
uppin#1
LL's another battle site man...
I can't battle man...unless you wanna make it like 30 mins due time, 10 lines.... I gotta start work in 40 mins...
aite make it 40 minutes due date u set it up dawg an just start spittin...ill drop in 35 minutes aite..
but hit this battle up wit a good vote.....
honest i mean
I got like just under 20 mins..... fu.ck it... sorry man, battle when I got a bit more time? I'll drop a vote on this battle now tho...
Real nice battle...
Lil Phresh had some killer multies throughout, good wordplay etc... flow was pretty good also.
I didn't see any personals in there tho...
Only problem I got is how can you battle someone with this verse below then use one like above soon after...elevating be fu.cked....
Jacka came nice... some good personal hits in there. Lacked the multies etc.. but was still hittin throughout...Originally posted by Lil Phresh
little man claiming he be an allstar/10
bitch, im better at this shit by-far/9
my dog PiMpiNTaY has my back/8
i smack ya in da face and make u wack/9
i didnt understand a ------- thing u said/12
sounded as stupid as P.T. said my mom gave'em head/13
all that shiz bout sue-per-star and shit/8
why dont u hand me ur pink slip and quit/10
my punches come fast and hard/7
ill dump u like a bankrupt credit card/9
Flow was good , for a 20 min spit it was a pretty tight verse.
For the fact of those two very different verses by Lil Phresh, 'n the fact I've seen the lines used in this battle before Jacka gets my vote...
Vote - Jacka
Forgot to post a link man....
Drop a vote on this battle if you got time....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99923
yea i will if i get 100 post
uppin #2
can u poll ya vote man..
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
who wants sum
Jacka came of the better
i liked his flow, with some good punches
Lil- please man do something about your writing style ... its an effort to read...
vote Jacka
L's breakdown
punches - jacka
personals - none
flow - jacka
creativity - jacka
opener - lil phresh (both were weak)
closer - jacka
structure - jacka
OVERALL - jacka
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