10-16 lines got till tomorow at midngiht if needed so spit
whenever u want.......................pce
Ill-Fresh
~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~
10-16 lines got till tomorow at midngiht if needed so spit
whenever u want.......................pce
check...
and you are spittin first....
(thas what we agreed to in the call out thread)
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Yo Yo here I go
Check check,the merkin of Fresh ...is in effect
Tryin to battle me but realisticly...u reject beef like a Hindu sect
Physicly and lyricly....I stomp Fresh to death
Its clear, you're so frozen wit fear I can see yo breath
I see-in-ya pic,you receivin head froma chick
But if art really reflects life ...that would be a guy suckin yo dick
I run wit insane crews... fresh run wit gay dudes
How can I lose to this fool....he only 14,he still growin pubes
Word by word, I murder and hurt you further
When will u learn,yo demo couldnt be hot if u held it over a burner
Bring yo whole dumb block...Ill spit till yo eardrums popped...
Better cum back 2 battle me when yo testicals done dropped
WHAT!
ight check it...
a 'lyrikal jezus' but this bitch does not come back from the dead...
his wrist is always workin, typin his verse and when he spits from the head...
(^jesus was a virgin^)
he rhymez with his eyes prayin to god for a win, like somethin spiritual...
no magic could help this kid, so he better be prayin for a miracle...
he claims he is from hell but i doubt it, his lines-have-no-fire...
did he bite off a christian album? could his rhymez-have-been-nicer?...
he couldnt even be 'trickin'-in-chrome, need to be healed like his mom kissin-your-dome...
my rhymez get brutal, you even be wishin-your-home...(hell)
look at your screen! it is like your mouth is alergic to shit...
from the looks of your verse it must of had to regergitate quick...
son of a SHHH! please hold your tongue in front of the son of god...
you couoldnt get any votes for yourself if you even dickrock all of the mods...
that guys nose in your avy represents another guys dick, dont deny it...thas a sin
no chance of winnin, so if you dick you might want to ride it...once again!
uppin for votes............................................. ......................plz vote people ill return the favour
uppin for the 2nd time, need votes votes votes votes votes votes votes votes........honest ones no hatin
Uppin for fuckin votes..........if u want people to vote fo yo battles plz vote for thierz vote vote vote vote vote.........pce
Nice battle...pretty even really..
Lyrical Jesus came hard, some nice raw hits in there, good structure also keepin it flowin nicely...
Few concepts heard before but presented well enough to work...
Ill-Fresh lacked the flow... the lines were slightly stretched doin more damage to the verse than ya opponent.
The first three bars were nice tho...good personals kinda..
he claims he is from hell but i doubt it, his lines-have-no-fire...
did he bite off a christian album? could his rhymez-have-been-nicer?...
^ I liked that...punch was pretty good...nice rhetorical shit...
All in all it was pretty even....two different styles. In the end tho lyrical Jesus kept it consistant and flowin well, makin for a better verse in my eyes....
Vote - Lyrical Jesus
I'll come back n poll when I get 100 posts....meanwhile - return the favour....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99923
thanx homie, uppin for more votes........^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ p.s. love the big L pic , L was allways ill like no other
uppin for votes the 5th time come on votes votes votes votes votes votes votes votes votes votes....................VOTES!
I liked lyrical jezuses verse cause he kept it simple and he didnt use mainstream "gangsta vocab" Ill had some good punches too but it was longer and its hard to keep interest when theres no beat on these loooooonngggggg ass lyrics, -- Lyrical god or whatever
my man jesus all the way
i like your flow man... you keep me in it ..... good shit
vote- lyrical jesus
haaaaaaa u too its a pretty close battle between me and u on the other one....keep the goos shit comin........uppin
yeah LyRiCaL-JeZuS~ won this fo sure......
fa'low an structure could were good, but even so the enjoyment dint really come into reading it. (IMO) though.
vote*LyRiCaL-JeZuS~
Yeah I already said that lyrical won this one, when I can vote ull have mine, until then ill keep posting to earn my rights ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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