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Thread: Hard Topic - ( White Christmas ) - 10 Lines

  1. December 25th, 2003, 12:13 PM #1
    Crooked-Comical
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    Hard Topic - ( White Christmas ) - 10 Lines

    This Is My Try Out For Topical Leaugue


    Alright ,


    A White Christmas Is Something I Long For And I Enjoy/
    Im Attracted To It More Than Mikeal Jackon Is To Lil Boys/
    Its Such A Wonderful Sight , White And Oh So Very Bright/
    Very Much Like The Northern Lights And Big Stars At Night/
    Whiter Then White Paint And Very Clean Unused Napkins/
    I Hate Getting Soakers But I Still Love When This Happens/
    Living In the Right Place You See 1 Every 10 Years,Maybe/
    Unless You Lived In Cold Antartica Since You were A Baby/
    I Love To Witness It , Its So Excuisit ,I Just Have To Stare/
    Its Like RapBattles Being Shut Down For Repair , Its Rare/


    Peace
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  2. December 25th, 2003, 12:22 PM #2
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    leave yo 3 peepo, ok but short and i dont care about christmas!!!!
    WordPerfect
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  3. December 25th, 2003, 12:27 PM #3
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    Here

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...15#post1016615

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...16#post1016616

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...18#post1016618

    My Bad ....
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  4. December 25th, 2003, 08:58 PM #4
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    Up
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    And Away
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  5. December 25th, 2003, 09:56 PM #5
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    dont u wont suceed in topic your shit has no feelin
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  6. December 25th, 2003, 09:58 PM #6
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    ^^^stfu noob!!!
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  7. December 25th, 2003, 10:20 PM #7
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    Basic, simplistic still i did not dislike readin this.
    Regardless if i agree with you or not,
    You did get ur message across..clearly.
    The Micheal line is obviously played out..Though..
    I probably didnt have to point this out to you.
    As for the overall picture, it was ok..to short..


    Witty Unpredicatable Talent And Natural Game


    My pokemon brings all the nerds to the yard, and there like "Do you wanna trade cards?" Damn Right lets trade some cards, I'll trade you, but not my charizard.

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  8. December 25th, 2003, 10:38 PM #8
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    Ehhh. This is a tryout. Take is seriously. Give them yo best shit. I predicted you didn't spend more than an hour on this, try spending two or three, you will have a great audition.
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  9. December 25th, 2003, 11:37 PM #9
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    This was an ok Peace...
    There was no real vocab, or multis...
    seemed like a novice writer....work on it patna
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