Crooked-Comical Vrs Jay.Q

[Crooked-Comical]

Alright

Check In

From The Moment You Check In we have 30 mins To post

Peace

[Jay.Q]

Alright. No Doubt,

CheCcin In

Good Luck...I'm Keying Now!

Uno'

Oh Do We Need Any Links? Or Anything Like That Before We Battle?

[Crooked-Comical]

I Dont Know What Links your Talking About ... So I Guess The Answers No

Alright ,





Im The Siccest In The Booth And Siccest On The Net /
Bitch Your Like A Sick Animal"Your Meetin With A Vet"/*
And When I Smash You Youll See A Total Catastrophy/
4236946269 Clones Of You , Couldnt Beat Half Of Me/
Im Keyin Ten Lines, I Mend Ryhmes,That Bend Minds/
You Cant Even Beat Me When you Dreamin At Bedtime/
And Fuck your Dreams , you Wont Even Be Tight There/
Cuz Any Dream With you Rappin Is Really A NIGHTMARE/
U Probably Think Youll Get The Win,And I Know U Want It/
But Its Like A Hand With No Fingers"Do Not Count On It"/

[Crooked-Comical]

* Sick Animals Meet With Veternarian ( VET ),Im A Veteran , (VET)


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[Jay.Q]

I?m Wrecking This Kid, But Like ?Speed Bags? I?m To Hard To Hit?
I?ll leave You Barred With Pits?; Until The Laser I Placed In Your Peripherals leave you ?Scarred To Bits?
If Rap Was Worth The Green You Would Be Far From Rich??War & Shit??
Does It Sound Familiar, Ill Will To Kill Ya, Place Your Heart In My Palms So I Can Let Ya Know I Feel Ya?
Sick Wit It, Q? Demolition, U? Noticed ?Herb? Worldwide? By The ?Stems You Missing?

Finish This Kid?

I?ll ?Sacrifice Your Life? Just So I Can Do It Over??Push To Shoulders?
You Wouldn?t ?Go Hard? If Your Testicles Was ?Caressed To Boulders?
Spit The Flames, Dude Let Me Help Ya And Put The Burner In Ya Grill?
Learn To Kneel, And Chill, These ?Needles? Will Numb Your Brain, So You Can?t Learn To Feel?
Eat You Like A Three Course Meal, It?s Ova??Limbs Thrown In Ditches?, Cause The Stretcher Can No Longer Hold Ya?/


There Ya Go...Votes Please

Good Luck Homie'

[Jay.Q]

Ay Man, I Wrote My Shit On Microsoft Word' That Is Why Those Question Marks Are On My Shit...

But When I Click On My Edit...It Tells Me I Am Not Able To Edit It...I Don't Know What's Wrong With My Shit

Get Votes In Though...

P'z

[Crooked-Comical]

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[Crooked-Comical]

Uppin #2


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[Crooked-Comical]

Uppin # 3

COME ON MAN FUCK LEAVE YA LINK ILL REPAY THE FAVOUR

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[Freeman]

crooked had a tight structure, and a overall better verse...

other guy u need to elevate and work on ur structure....

dont use Word to type ya shit up man.......

crooked took all categories....

vote - crooked

[I_Can't-Lose]

crook took this one all the way but i can't vote

i will appreciate if you will make a honest vote on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100913

[Crooked-Comical]

uppin 4

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[LM]

punches - cc
personals - cc
flow - cc
structure - cc
creativity - cc
opener - cc
closer - cc

OVERALL - cc

Hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6&pagenumber=2

[Crooked-Comical]

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[In$tig@TeR]

Im The Siccest In The Booth And Siccest On The Net /
Bitch Your Like A Sick Animal"Your Meetin With A Vet"/*

^^Nice Wordplay


U Probably Think Youll Get The Win,And I Know U Want It/
But Its Like A Hand With No Fingers"Do Not Count On It"/

^^I like that Finisher...Shits Dope...

Jay Q? Your Soft Man...Elevate