I always come in here and give feedback even if i dont drop anything but since i follow rules here are three i just did:
Realist and Ghod: Potential Eyes
Auspicicous: Something Merry
Aragorn: forgot the title
This is my first collab...here it gooooooooooooooes
Whitelightning:
Throughtout The Many Stages Of Life Growin Up
Many Sources Diversift Simplicity, Makin Life Tough
Verbal Statements Pulling Brain Thoughts In Multiple Directions
Actions Create Friendly Factions, Reactin Parental Sanctions
Free Range Or Put Under Civil House Arrest Is Under Extreme Protest
They Think What's Best, But It Add's Weight To Your Chest
Slip On Headphones, Your Now Delivered A Different Message
Livin On Edge, Disrespectin Proper Morals, Destroyin Ledges
Canyons Full Of Dismal Dismay, No Clear Way To Turn
Supposed To Learn In Life, Endless Strife, Cause For Constant Concern
Independance Is Only Positive Until You Striding Astray
Everyday Parents Worry, Don't Know What To Say, Keepin Em at Bay
This Trust Must Be Built On A Permanent Foundation
Create Examples For Next Generations, Show What They Will Be Facin
You Can't Rewind Pittiful Actions Or Freeze Real Time
In Your Mind, The Answers You Will Find, Many Different Kinds
Biases Playing Major Role Of Personal Endeavours, Continued Suspense
Which Source Will Be Your Prominent Influence...
Speek.E.Z.:
Do My Words Reach Millions? Do They Actually Listen..
Do They Start Hating If I Drop The Name High Class For Dissing?..
Do They Understand My Mission Or Are They Caught In The Hype..
Do They Wear What I Wear Just Because Of What I Write..
If I Say I Pack Heat.. Do They Go Out And By A Heater..
If I Call A Girl A Bitch, Is That The Way They Start 2 Treat Her..
Are My Lyrics More Then Words? Are They A Way Of Life?..
Don’t Compare Your Life, With The Way I Deal With My Strife..
We Will Probably Never Meet, But Do You Consider Me A Friend?..
My Lyrics Aren’t Specified They Are Just A Piece Of Mind I Lend..
And In The End We Need To Realize How Much Power We Hold..
Highlight The Meanings In Bold, Then We Make Riches In Gold..
A Pen And Paper And A Way Of Life For Anyone That Reads This..
For Us To Fix The Game, We Need To Realize That Influence Exists..
Emerge:
Many circumstances invest one of which is a pounding chest
Yet I infest with my Jedi ingress…admiring only the best
I only assimilate those traits for those fighting inevitable losses
None of them considered prophets nor assembled on crosses
Fighting by their own beliefs a gene damn worthy of bequeath
Love, faith, religion, & moral discipline none ever placed beneath
Under vain pleasures…or instant gratification…of their own
Eternal flames light enlightening even without a sun still shone
Never will they dare accept theories imposed…a mortal sin
Calm in presentation even in defeat not to mention…a win
Everyone I ever looked up to for bravery not necessarily morals
Orals dictated eloquently such manner cutting enemies like chorals
Values so important…enough to disregard the loves of his life
Even willing to rest unpeacefully knowing he widowed a wife
Ready yet shooken steadily looking…into a one inch tunnel
Yes…he is prepared to drop his life into the forgotten funnel
Only thing worth living for got you determined with imprudence
Under no circumstance should you compromise love for influence
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